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I like it.. The only thing I did not like about My system in Hollywood was that the protagonist became a very fast boyfriend, he is in Hollywood by God, who as a boy has not dreamed of sleeping (having sex) with stars there .. I get upset that the protagonist is with someone who is meh and doesn't have much development and fell in love in a month and a half during the shoot.. The majority of relationships like that do not work much in Hollywood, and those that work are exceptions since, one earns more than the other, jealousy comes there, also if the actor/triz is handsome/cute, jealousy always comes for the movies that they are going to film, because always but always in most movies there are hot kisses or scenes (sex, touch etc). And hence jealousy comes, infidelities, among many shady things .. The truth does not matter the romance in Hollywood very well, that's why it has to be casual relationships where everything is agreed, and they just enjoy themselves for a while and that's it, no strings attached, then when you already get tired will marry you with someone you see who is trustworthy, who will not betray you and above all that is not from Hollywood hahaha
The novel is fine, I like the direction, I just don't like the construction of characters, it's very simple and repetitive that it annoys me to read it, the romantic aspect was really rushed, there are many girls who can be FMC but you chose one in the first chapters that was super forced and now you hardly mention her, the best thing would have been for him to be single, enjoy his youth and marry a woman when he is already 30 years old, but what to do, I hope he changes this aspect because it is killing me with boredom
Entonces no escribas subnormal, si no te aguantas las critcas mo escribas, a nadie le importas demasiado, es un fanfic de bleach hay muchos por ahí y con mejores cosas que este de aqui, si no me gusta comentaré y ya, nadie me va a privar de mi opinion... Además si vas a crear la mitad de la historia con OC'S, entonces cambia el nombre de la historia por que hacer muchos ocs en una historia que tiene muchos personajes utilizables es simplemente otra historia diferente a bleach, que sea mas facil para ti no significa que sea del gusto de los demas... Comentario copiado por si lo borras así no me silencias como a muchos
friend, please no tory noo, to be honest, the tory actress is horrible in appearance, people overestimate her, the only thing worth her is her body, even that is not a big deal, plis no tory, I don't even like the personality in the script that Samantha gives her, it's rubbish... Well, since I've said my opinion, now I'm going with who I think I should be with ...... and it's Carmen, Miguel's mom XDDDD, to be honest I think she's the prettiest actress of cobra kai so far, I've seen the photos where she didn't have her hair done like in the show and 😋
Gu Yue..