Reviews of Persona: Hero x Villain System

Honestly so I like what happening the story the character and more tho few things I had a problem with that slow Persona but overall it's great 👍

it's an good story just confused with what is happening and timeline stuff

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The story is pretty great, it’s refreshing, well written. The background is great but my God this anger is absolutely useless. I would have thought that the system would have erased the anger of the pit but no and that causes only problems. The way that the mc follows is not good and it would only cause problems. I like his neutrality, I hope he never becomes a villain but he’s on the edge right now. Bruce Wayne was able to hold his public character without stumbling, but the mc only stumbled. This fight in Midtown was an example of the consequences of his lack of control, I hope that with the previous persona it will stop, I have the impression that the system controls his emotions. This anger is not natural. There is the problem with Kamar taj. You forget that they don’t care about anything that happens inside the planet and that is not a being that will destroy the planet itself like Dormamu, The Ancien One didn’t care about Loki or anything. I hope his York identity is never mixed up with mutants and vigilantism. Todd has succeeded in Dc as well as Clark, Bruce and others, Red Hood is on the edge of the villain, he could never have a civilian life if it comes out, could not own a company. Other than that, the story is really great, I advise to read it

10/10 I love reading this so far my only complaint is there are not enough chapters and they are not releasing fast enough I need more

This is great, love jason todd.

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I’d hoped you would start this story again after I read it the first time. Serious potential to be a big one

This story is a breath of fresh air. I would recommend that everyone reads it. I hope that the author keeps up the great work and keep a stable update speed.

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It's great 👍 thanks for writing it. This is My first review so not really sure how this works. This is the filler so I can Post this. Like how are you supposed to get 140 words in one of these

I’m at chapter 11 and he hasn’ done anything slightly villainous yet. He’s just a slightly mean hero……

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I love this, mc's character's attitude really suits my taste. Maybe the drawbacks in this fanfic are the timings that confuse me and the updates are very unstable.

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I need more I need more I needed more..hoped this is dropped.it really good. ........great story.deeez nut Soo never gonna give you up

no problem in writing quality for me. the story is developing fabulously and smoothly. character is clear with no sign of hypocrisy more like a perfect anti-hero. updates are mostly on time don't know about future chapter uploads in fact I don't think anyone knows. not sure about what kind of marvel world it is but it is shaping into a picture slowly and perfectly. looking forward to reading more chapters. it is a successful system based fanfiction.keep writing and never think of dropping.

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