thechaos
Overall, the story is alright. Concepts and scenes are borrowed but twisted to fit in the story. The thing I find lacking is the character design. Chaos (She is added), Hestia, and Percy don't feel 'real'. They pout, they huff, they blush. It honestly feels like an anime rendition of Percy Jackson The Gamer.
Seeing as the world background from Percy Jackson I have to give a good score on 2 things. World Background and Character Design. Writing quality is. The stability updates range from daily to having to wait more than one week. But seeing it's fanfic and I've seen much slower inconsistent update schedules for a fanfic I say it rank's high. Although I've only 2 chapters. The second chapter strongly resembles if not DOWNRIGHT COPIED a chapter of a certain much older fanfic that has the exact same premise. I've only made 1 review and I only read 2 chapters. So please do not be upset. Still, though it was nice reading it.
Just great fun to read, that basically sums it up. The only bad thing that it has (and it is understandable) are the updates that are every 2 months T_T, otherwise both in writing and character relationships and development of both story and characters is very good, it only remains to see how the story ends.