thefirespeaks
OMG! I'm speechless. Though I'm not interested in cultivation books, this piqued my interest. I'm open to a million cultivation books that would be as good as this. The character building is 100% awesome, the world-building is exceptional, and the writer's voice is extraordinary. Everything is just beyond what I can compliment. Try this, readers💜 You sure gonna enjoy it, lest I forget, if you love humour, you can tag along. I'm so lucky to stumble upon this🖤
Ah yes, the first sentences themselves dictated that the author recognizes quality writing. The MC has a consistent design as the plot moves forward [Effortless, Humble and even Cautiously Smart]. I'm not that familiar with systems and cultivations but this book gave easy explanations for me to grasp the concepts of the two. I hope you'll do well and attain the success this novel deserves!
Cultivation + OP = peak fiction. This is my favourite type of novel so of course I'll be bias. Thank you author for making the writing so good so that I could enjoy the novel without having to pause every few paragraphs to understand what was written. If you're looking for a cultivation novel, well you've found what you're looking for. Get to reading!
I would say solid story. The main character keeps his wits about him and is cool and collected. the story overall is good. I would say work on your Grammer and flow, I would often have to stop and think on a certain line of text as the syntax is very unique, it's not all bad it just breaks the immersion every now and then. I also make Grammar mistakes So I won't judge on that to much. The cussing is hilarious, again very unique. I Personally enjoyed the story so far.