LightningAsura
First of all, I think it's an excellent read, I didn't have high hopes due to the synopsis to be honest but I always tell myself not to judge without reading first. I don't have much to criticize due to the author's good writing, it is true that there are things that feel forced but as long as you read to enjoy and not to criticize, you will enjoy it. What does bother me is the waste of his ability, just thinking about all the abilities that have to do with the mind makes me go crazy as only focusing on simple cold weapons, the physical body is limited, the mind is infinite. In the martial world he had so many opportunities to learn more than just physical things but I'll let it slide considering that in the original world he needs strength quickly to protect himself. I sincerely hope you use your ability for what it is truly made for, MAGE, just thinking about future rune knowledge drives me crazy, if I were in your place knowing that everything I read will be perfectly in my memory, mage would be my first choice, focus on the physical when it is possible that other people have their respective classes in that, will only make you weaker
This was such a hidden gem that I found while searching for world hoppingโor in this case traveling into books! The tension and the plot are great, the characters are real and not just two dimensional. I love how our protagonist, Leo, uses his brain instead of charging in blindly into situations like many others do when they find out they have a system or something along those lines. There are hints of romance and it is well written and not rushed and as of chapter 350, no harem which is a plus for me. Anyways, itโs a fantastic read with a smart MC who finds his own path as a reader in these novels he travels into.
Only i am a reader is really a great story. concept of traveling to the worlds you have read about it very interesting and novel at least for me. Writing is good. Story is developing nicely and isnt rushed, though i would like a littlr bit faster progression. Characters are also quite interesting and enough thought is put into them, though mostly the story revolves around the MC and the story itself hasnt progressed enough to actually judge the side characters. World background is also interesting and i am looking forward to its further development. As for updates, the author udually uploads 2 chapters a day, however chapters are short and really add up to 1 chapter a day(idk ehy the author dorsnt merge the chapters and just put out one chapter a day, maybe it has some benefits this way idk). the problem is that some days there are no uploads, which is fine, but the fact that there is no notice that there will be nochapters is kind of a bummer. ( at least i havent found any notices and the authors discord is kind of dead so idk where to look). all in all a good interesting novel and definitely deserves a high rating.
Author were you unable to post this novel on another site? Because I and many people use the translator to read, but Webnovel put a program that is preventing me from reading translated, so I've been stopped for more than 1 month without reading, because I can't, this one and many others are like this, just the fanfics are translating normally. I stopped around 222, then I'm dying of curiosity, if you can post on another site for those who use the translator it would be of great help. (translated by Google translator)
Pretty unique concept. Spelling and grammar are very good overall. The main character's personality is logical. I like how the first world is a low level world but future worlds are slowly increasing in level. The sense of mystery in the real world is perfect. Honestly theres so many directions that this story could be taken to that im looking forward to it. Top tier original novel right here.
TLDR: This is the only โsystemโ novel I have actually enjoyed reading. This is a well written โI know future eventsโ novel with some twists. In OIATR, Leo (MC) travels to the worlds of different books he has read and has to achieve certain objectives to return to Earth. Each world he travels to is fairly unique and the writing is solid. The worlds and characters are getting more interesting as the novel progresses. Iโll probably come back and update once the second or third arc is completed. (Currently on ch ~230)
Honestly, it's been awhile since I found a novel that is actually good on this website. So, the novel is at chapter 211, but I can't really give my full thoughts on it yet. This is a infinity-world novel, where the main character can bring back items or skills he learns back into his own world. Fantasy simulator had this same exactly plot. So far, the two novels are extremely similar. The only thing I am hoping for is that the author doesn't completely neglect the main world. The writing quality is great, I don't have to re-word sentences in my head too much. The story development is great as well. The first arc felt like it was a real novel the main character was put in, and was very interesting and unique. The character design is good as well. The main character seems to me like hes still trying to find himself, but thats fine. The side characters are fairly okay? The first arc didn't really have any characters that traveled with the main character, so I can't really say that many of them were fleshed out, hopefully that gets better in the second arc. World background is fine as well. I feel like if that world did exist, it would look somewhat similar to what the book described. Overall, a good read. Hopefully it does not fall off later in the novel.
Writing Quality for this site this writing quality is mind-blowing in the grand scheme of things there are points to criticize, but if you're reading off of this website this is top-notch. Stability of Updates from what I understand from reading about the updates, they're rather sporadic in their timings; of course, this could be a problem of timezones but the timing on the updates always seems off for me, though they usually upload 2 chapters a day. Story Development, honestly, this story's development is really creative as it strings together the relatively uncreative stories into something more interesting with the reader (The MC) going through the various worlds and seeing the influence he has on them is still a wonderful experience. Character Design, unfortunately, this is where the novel dips a bit, as the characters are in my opinion too linear; their goals and ambitions and even their personality as a whole seem very rudimentary; of course, this novel still is leaps and bounds better than some of the stuff on this site but the character design is about at the quality you would expect from a weekly featured or a top novel on this site. World Background honestly this is always a complex thing to rate but I would say that the world background presented in this novel far surpasses what you would expect as the background of each world is thought out and well planned it's missing a stroke of brilliance from the writer in my opinion but it is still perfectly fine but it seems to be a missing inspiration but I can see why the author would have trouble finding a passion in his writing as each world are very different. Overall Review - Overall this is a good novel it's not something that I'd be checking every day but if I happen to be looking to read something this is pretty high up on my mental list the author clearly respects his work and is very professional in the way he writes things and he is a textbook standard author which can be both good and bad. Good in the way that he is meeting every expectation that I hold for my novels currently. Bad in the way that he's missing a spark of inspiration "A stroke of brilliance" so to speak, whether that be in some characters the story, the world, and sometimes even the MC himself is missing a certain spark that I believe would push this novel even higher than it currently is. (4.2/5) Hope this helps you decide whether or not to read this.