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I was surprised when I saw this novel. I have been I waiting a long time. I've lost hope. But when I see your novel again 🌋that is Best thing happened today And I hope you will make this novel the best of fanfıc 🌹 this novel is the thered novel I read it 4 years ago if my memory is correct, And I still didn't forget this epic novel
a really good fanfic and not op at all at the very least the mc has to work hard for anything.i think this is the best one piece ff out there long chapters as well. the plot is very good and pretty much no plotholes and the mc does not have any power he does not use. he is not op his power does not exceed the one piece world as of chapter 123
It's one of the best fanfic's I've read out there, author executes the scenes well enough that a reader can envision it in one sitting, he is a master at Dao of Cliffhangers, there are no grammatical mistakes and the characters are fleshed out and not forgotten. It used to be 1 chapter a day before HIATUS and the timeline written by Author is well researched and written. Definitely Recommend. (Note: This review was written at the time of HIATUS)
I don't have much to say, but I love the world-building, the hype, and the adventures. Since I mostly read harem, it's not a problem for me. The characters aren't bland either: the author has clearly spent a lot of time developing them. I would say it's a perfect story for me. However, all perfect things come to an end, and I've read all the latest chapters. Sigh, I guess it's time to focus on my own life now.
This story has been worth the wait for you to redo it, it’s a much more well thought out and just deeper on an emotional, political, and other aspects of the story your story now is much more fulfilling now when compared to the first version of it. The story really is much more intricate and beautiful with things being well put together from the old story to adding in details that really build this into a whole different world of one piece. Your fic could be a reference to others on a largely unexplored era of piracy in One Piece. Thank you for writing it.