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What if you still made him lose to Po after all this, now that would be funny. He's so sure he will win, c'mon throw a curve ball author!!!
Very intriguing story so far author, interested in seeing where you take it. A different power system that I haven't seen in a story so far so that's a plus. I like that you added a picture for his sword, hope that trend continues with any other item/power he displays in the future. Keep up the good work.
Reviewing other people's reviews instead of the story itself. I've seen it all.
Say you write a story in which you gave humans the ability to fly and someone says in the comments "Well actually it's impossible for humans to fly in the real world". That's what you're doing with the fire in this instance.
Who knows if they're breathing oxygen and not helium? Who knows if the water molecules in their world have 5 hydrogen atoms instead of 2? How is it even possible for a fruit to allow him to emit fire in the first place? Just assume everything is the same as the real world UNTIL the author says otherwise. The author thought his/her way was cool so they did it. What more do you need in a fan-fic? Do you need every author to make a science book explaining the laws of physics in their world for you to enjoy?
Using real-world logic in a one piece fan-fic???
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I sense future conflict. "*Relative* please help me, this person disrespected our family."
If they don't they will be the first-ever potential love interest I've ever read of this website not to end up with the MC.