Reviews of One Piece: Flowing Blade-Like Flame (STOPED)
One Piece: Flowing Blade-Like Flame (STOPED)
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interesting concept but it might have been even more better to proof-read it before posting to see if you are getting the names and places accurate. for example - names - Captain Nakayamamoto - Capt.Yamamoto?; (MC)Zhang Yang - Publicity?; Garp - Karp/Kapu?; Kuzan - Green phaesant??; Sengoku - Warring States Period???; Steel Bones??; Places like Marine Ford - ma lin Fanduo/Marlene Vandor/Marin Vandou?? and when you say Liu Jian Ruo H0uo/Liu ren ruohuo - is this supposed to be ryujin Jakka??? Two generic Suggestions if you want to take them: 1) I would first recommend sticking to one form of addressing your own characters instead of making it in several varieties where the readers are kept guessing or analyzing to see if you are talking about what we think you are talking about. 2) Even better for readers if you can stick to the original name given to places, people and things for the fan-fic instead of experimenting with alternate names that change from chapter to chapter. Looking forward to reading more fun chapters!!
