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Reviews of NPC Code: Red Riding Hood

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NPC Code: Red Riding Hood

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WidestGrin
WidestGrinLv6WidestGrin

This is one of the better written originals on wn. You can read it comfortably without breaking your head over grammar and stuff. There's enough world building and it has a good pacing. Good work author!

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Faysal_Ahmed_5058
Faysal_Ahmed_5058Lv2Faysal_Ahmed_5058

the synopsis seemed like it was a rip-off of legendary mechanic but it is not. it has good starting and steady update. the story of okami Uchiha and red seems parallel to me.

KenShimizu
KenShimizuLv1KenShimizu

it's really cool, it hooked me from the very start, its unique and it has a nice plot, Ill be waiting for more updates, So keep up the good work author!

d_nmalory
d_nmaloryLv2d_nmalory

For my first video game novel this was amazing. The storyline is captivating and has been developed with such creativity. I was immersed into it for the word go. Waiting patiently for more updates.

Saviour_Ibok_9332
Saviour_Ibok_9332Lv2Saviour_Ibok_9332

Great story and plot. I love the setting though there are a few confusing things here and there like how Red Rose can feel when she's...coded. Grammar and tenses are issues that needs to be fixed but over all, great plot.

NightClouds
NightCloudsLv1NightClouds

As of CH 34: So, so interesting! The story of NPCs and a player oohhh. Plus the fairytales tie in...ohhhh Ok, so it's really really good. The story does have some grammar flaws, just things such as plurals, modifiers, etc. Notably, less near the end. (Yay! Improvement <3)Some sentences should have a bit more clarification. The POV switch does confuse me sometimes but probably because I got really interested in the other POV. Great immersion. The world-building is nice and the characters really do have their own personalities :) Overall a recommended read! Great Job.

Hellifrit
HellifritLv1Hellifrit

Perfection, that is what I can describe this book as. The system and everything about this world is well done, and the characters are well realized. The beginning is blood pumping and great, giving us the proper motivation to Red's adventure. Grammar and composition are also great since I barely see any errors at all. Overall, like I said, this is perfect and I like it. Keep up the good work author!

Blissa
BlissaLv2Blissa

Hello, Good day! All I can say is that you're book is really good! The synopsis really made everything cool, that I added it to my library. Good job, author! Good luck👏

Resurgent
ResurgentLv13Resurgent

We have a lot authors doing real good these days, huh! Anyways I really appreciate the style of writing and of course I would love to see more chappies soon.. There are a few mistakes but they don't really count...Dear fellow author you're already doing well. Kudos to you author!

Violet_167
Violet_167Lv13Violet_167

This book is amongst the handful of books I truly believe should be made into a comic or even an animated show. You really describe every detail about the world so well and made a new reader out of me. Not exaggerating by giving it 5 stars because it truly deserves it. One day I'll come back and find my review when it is turned into a comic or show. Wishing you all the best with this story.

Empzze
EmpzzeLv11Empzze

nice work author, I like the way the plot is unique and different and thrilling interesting storyline too and i also like the narrative concept too keep it up.

Nakasuka
NakasukaLv11Nakasuka

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J_Writing
J_WritingLv11J_Writing

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maverick_maya
maverick_mayaLv2maverick_maya

The book is awesome. And I love the book cover. I was completely hooked on the story ever since I read the first paragraph. To be honest the plotline of the story was very different from the ones I usually read but this one completely blown me away. If you want a change from the usual modern stories this is the one for you. All the best with your story mate.

VeryVyle
VeryVyleLv1VeryVyle

Nice background info and really well written scenes. The story really has a hook and also gripping action that never let your attention go. Keep up the nice work!

Crown_of_Flame
Crown_of_FlameLv5Crown_of_Flame

I'm really liking the story. The way the author is creating a picture of ongoing events is good. I really found the story captivating. Keep writing you are doing great[img=recommend]

_Rain
_RainLv11_Rain

When I started reading, I thought it was like Sword Art Online ( the one game anime I have ever seen lol) but no, this is wayy different from it. The grammar is flawless. I envy your writing skill lol. I am speechless at your world background. I could imagine the world very clearly. and yes, breaking the rules always sound fun😂 All the best, author!!

REaper
REaperLv4REaper

Way to go author, what impeccable writing, seriously the way you have described the plot is one of the best. And an out-of-the-box plot. Hope to see you maintain the same momentum. All the best.

Yoekko
YoekkoLv1Yoekko

The first chapter was a good read, some of the dialogue felt a little off, but maybe it's because I'm conditioned to different styles of writing, not that it made me want to stop reading or ruined the immersion. The thought of an NPC breaking the boundaries of the code they were forced into is somewhat inspiring when you realize that we as people aren't too different. I also noticed some unanswered questions and plot points lingering in the story, so good luck finding those answers.