Review Detail of Yoekko in NPC Code: Red Riding Hood

The first chapter was a good read, some of the dialogue felt a little off, but maybe it's because I'm conditioned to different styles of writing, not that it made me want to stop reading or ruined the immersion. The thought of an NPC breaking the boundaries of the code they were forced into is somewhat inspiring when you realize that we as people aren't too different. I also noticed some unanswered questions and plot points lingering in the story, so good luck finding those answers.