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NEW START IN NEW LIFE

Good news, I finally finish my collage and now I'm finally a Bachelor of Economic (Sarjana Ekonomi). It's really a long journey for me... 6 years... and now I can do anything I want. I want to correct this trash I made in an attempt to learn English. So, I guess I should start with correcting on my many mistakes on grammar and stories... Thanks ************************************************************ It's a Story about a man who died saving someone and given a second chance at a new life in The World God Only Knows world and there are also many characters from other anime. That sum this story. ************************************************************ This is my first English story please understand the grammar isn't good enough. I did use Grammarly the free version though so I hope it can make my story more readable. ************************************************************ Also please give me support with coffee here ko-fi.com/boy72 as I really need money soon to pay for my college. If you guys help me pay it I will be really grateful and post 5 chapters/day for 1 month. ************************************************************ Rank 1-50 : 1000 Word/Chapter Rank 51-100 : 900 Word/Chapter Rank 101-150 : 800 Word/Chapter Rank 151-199 : 700 Word/Chapter Rank 200 : 600 Word/Chapter Rank 200+ : Up to me. It means it can be more or less as I like. ************************************************************ The Update is always 2 chapters/day. And starting today the update will be at night time. At least in my place, it will be night. Don't really know about the other place's time. I finally have a new laptop that I manage to buy using my wage. So I guess you can expect my story on your library again.

NamanyaSiAldi · Anime & Comics
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CHAPTER 4 HIKIGAYA KOMACHI’S FEELING (EDIT WITH GRAMMARLY)

KOMACHI POV

"I'm sorry." Saying this I resolve myself to jump. But before I can do that someone hug me from the back.

"DON'T YOU STUPID GIRL!" I can hear Keima's voice yelling at me making me want to cry.

"WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING KNOW. WHAT DO YOU WANT TO DO!" And I cry hard. I really cry the first time since my brother kill himself 2 years ago.

"Left me. Just left me. I didn't want to live anymore. Please, let me jump. Please." Saying this while crying I try to force him away. Seeing him actually hurt me you know. At first, I didn't think much about him. Then I move to the house next door not to long. Maybe few weeks after Oni-chan's accident as we can't get around his death anymore.

He seems like a good guy. That's what I tough of him the first time we meet. He help me many times that I can forget about my own pain. But I can't take it anymore. The pain is too much. Every night I dream of Oni chan saying how much he hates me because I didn't help him.

That always made the pain feel so much worse. And yet finally I can made this feeling over.

"WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR BROTHER WILL THINK IF YOU DO THIS?" Hearing this made me mad at him. How dare he ask that? How dare he... cry. He cry. Why?

"Why?"

"You are my friend Komachi. I will always be there for you. I'm not him. I'm not your brother. But I will always be there when you need me. I promise." My feed starting to feel weak. There isn't anyone here beside the two of us.

KEIMA POV

"I Promise." Saying this I hug her carefully not to hurt her. And use my new skill that I buy last night, 'Active Calming Presence'

It's lucky that I buy many skills last night thinking this kind of skill can be useful in capturing target.

I bring her to the long chair in the rooftop.

"Are you calm now?" She nods weakly. I give her water from the system. Luckily she didn't ask about that.

We talk about a great many things. About her brother and all of that. I just nod at here and there. And make some comment to her story.

There isn't much I can do for her in right now. I can only hear her story and help her.

"You know Komachi, I didn't think your brother will be happy with you now. I know he left. And I know it's you. But you still have your parents. You still have friends. You still have me." Saying this I smile at her. In my past life, I'm an idiot who gets scorned by everyone. In this life, I promise not to get scorned like that again.

Like I said. I will be there when my friend needs me.

"MISSION FROM SYSTEM.

SAVE HIKIGAYA KOMACHI FROM SUICIDE.

REWARD : SHADOW CLONE FROM NARUTO-VERSE

TIME : 1 HOUR" (COMPLETED)

I put the notification away and just sat by Komachi.

Not too long after that Nikaido see the two of us and told us to clean the rooftop us the punishment.

Finishing all of that the two us going home, but before that she gets closer to me and whisper. "Thank you, Keima-kun!"

"Yeah." I can only respond with a smile on my face happy that I didn't fail. 'I will protect my friends.'

Few days after that I and Elsie finally start conquering Mio.

I know from the story that she starts as a rich spoiled girl and that her father says she has to be proud. But I think she takes it to far. In her condition, while her mother working she just uselessly spend money here and there. In capturing her I have to make her realized that in this life you can't always get what you want. That the world didn't spin around you. I only doing one thing like Keima in the anime. That is bringing her to the party of some rich people.

And there I made her realized that she just has to proud of herself now. Not about the past.

Finishing up conquering Mio everything back to normal. Like I said before. As normal as it could be.

CAPTURING STORY ONLY FOCUS ON THE GODDESSES HOST SORRY FOR THE CONVENIENCE.

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