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Good news, I finally finish my collage and now I'm finally a Bachelor of Economic (Sarjana Ekonomi). It's really a long journey for me... 6 years... and now I can do anything I want. I want to correct this trash I made in an attempt to learn English. So, I guess I should start with correcting on my many mistakes on grammar and stories... Thanks ************************************************************ It's a Story about a man who died saving someone and given a second chance at a new life in The World God Only Knows world and there are also many characters from other anime. That sum this story. ************************************************************ This is my first English story please understand the grammar isn't good enough. I did use Grammarly the free version though so I hope it can make my story more readable. ************************************************************ Also please give me support with coffee here ko-fi.com/boy72 as I really need money soon to pay for my college. If you guys help me pay it I will be really grateful and post 5 chapters/day for 1 month. ************************************************************ Rank 1-50 : 1000 Word/Chapter Rank 51-100 : 900 Word/Chapter Rank 101-150 : 800 Word/Chapter Rank 151-199 : 700 Word/Chapter Rank 200 : 600 Word/Chapter Rank 200+ : Up to me. It means it can be more or less as I like. ************************************************************ The Update is always 2 chapters/day. And starting today the update will be at night time. At least in my place, it will be night. Don't really know about the other place's time. I finally have a new laptop that I manage to buy using my wage. So I guess you can expect my story on your library again.

NamanyaSiAldi · Anime & Comics
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CHAPTER 3 AOYAMA MIO AND HIKIGAYA KOMACHI (EDIT WITH GRAMMARLY)

ELSIE POV

My name is Elsie de lute Irma. Now in the human world, I will be known as Elsie Katsuragi. The chief ask me to become a member of the captured soul. Even though I'm not that good I will do my best.

My buddy is my brother Keima-sama. He is amazing. He captured lose souls in a week. It seems like he is quite popular. Apparently, he made a novel. I also read the novel he made. It's really amazing.

After the ruckus in school, we are in his home now. It seems like the father isn't here. And only mother here. I show her the letter that is shown by chief Dokuro. I'm a bit afraid of how angry she is. But I know everything is alright because Keima-Nii-Sama calm mother easily.

I and Nii-sama talk about many things. I explain to him that any capture related memory will be modified. But it seem like Nii-sama know. He is amazing. He knows everything.

The next day we are in school again. I made friends with everyone. Komachi-chan is very nice. She give me sweets. Although she asks about Nii-sama to much. It seem like she like Nii-sama. Ehehehe.

While going school my alarm of lose soul active. Nii-sama realized it too and ask me to turn it off so that people didn't stare too much. Then the blonde girl with a twin tail appears from a nice car. I said to Nii-sama that girl is the one with a lost soul inside her.

"Nii-sama that girl have lose soul inside her. We should capture it." Nii-sama nods at me.

"Gather her data, like her home, hobby, and everything you know. It can help us capture her faster."

Keima POV

When Elsie's alarm active at Mio I look at her carefully. She really is the definition of Tsundere huh. With blonde hair. Twin tail. Arrogant. What a tsundere.

"Oy, commoner. It seem like you just thinking something rude about me." Saying this she stood in front of me while playing her whip.

'She realized it? What is this? Some kind of radar? Hahaha.'

"Do you mean me?"

"Of course I mean you commoner. You should know your place. Get away from me." Hearing her say that actually made me a bit angry.

"Commoner? Are you talking about yourself Aoyama-san?" I say it like in a whisper but it seems she get what I'm saying causing her to pale.

"Hmph. I will get you later you commoner."

She walks away from me. I admit it's different from what Keima did. But there is no way I can do 100% things like him.

"MISSION FROM SYSTEM.

SAVE HIKIGAYA KOMACHI FROM SUICIDE.

REWARD : SECRET

FAILURE : HIKIGAYA KOMACHI DEAD.

TIME : 1 HOUR"

What just? In many years Nana the system give me some regular quest like creating a novel. Manga. And helping people. But not in many years did it have something about dead.

'What is this system?'

[System sensingHikigaya Komachi wants to commit suicide. so the system decide to give host quest to save her.]

'Why did she want to commit suicide? Just what the hell happened here?' saying this I actually starting to panic about the possibility of her suicide.

[Host, do you remember what day today is?]

System's question made me froze. Today is the day...

FB

"My brother killed himself. I didn't why he did it. But didn't he realized that it hurt us so much? It hurt me so much. Please Keima. Please. Stay with me today."

FB END

Today is the day Hikigaya Hachiman's Suicide.

Luckily I know where she is right now. I told Elsie to say that I got sick so I have to go to health care.

I run. Run. Run. Run until I arrive at the rooftop. Standing there, Komachi stare at the sky.

"I'm sorry." Saying this she nearly jump. But before she can I hug her from her back.

"DON'T YOU STUPID GIRL!"

"WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING KNOW. WHAT DO YOU WANT TO DO!"