Reviews of Naruto: Time control

This story is a good idea but the main character has many name because the author change the name at each sentence and this is very tiresome to read. What´s more the ninjutsu spelling is wrong for example is « Katon » and no « Cato ». These errors do not allow to immerse ourselves in the story.

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I couldn't even go past chapter 24 cause how quickly the story contradicting itself. The author does not seem to have a clue how to follow his own plots.

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It good till ch. 200 something. Not very exceptional but still ok and enjoyable. That's all I can say.......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

It is a Fanfic which is a crossover of Naruto, One Piece & One Punch Man. Initial Plot was Good, but kinda Dulled in the End, Overall it is a Nice Novel.

Even I, who has such patience, can't help but get angry at this fucking translator. This 'translator' seriously just copied and pasted an MTL and slapped it onto webnovel. Not only that, he made a fucking patre*n. Put some effort into it, will ya?

The development is nice, just the guy's name . Aside from that the story is pretty much good. Just don't drop it ....... Its cool Is it harem😅?

I can't belive some people are desperate enough to read this shit. The translation is so bad that you loose brain cells for each chapter you read.

Dropped half way through chapter 1 Reasons 1 getting ages wrong 2 confusing ability 3 appears to be irrelevant people mc talks to 4 unbelievably annoying when wrong words or names are used

Don't read..... Cancer inducing translation ... Very bad translation..... Machine Translation level...........................................

novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

bad tlanslating and like almost evry review here.....if you can accept the name that changes a few times every chapter you can go on and read it ... seriously.... a phrase end with the MC's name and the next phrase starts with the MC's name.... how can they be different names?????? and its not like he missed a letter or something similar.....

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The writing is bad but still readable but the name kept changing and in one chapter you can see a random "no" without any clue why the mc said "no" so it's very confusing that's why I'm dropping this either way it's still a good one and the jutsu 🤦 What the hell is "Suiton, Building a Water Wall"?? This is a bruh moment for me

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Only got 10 chapters in even with a 'find/replace extension' and gave up. The names of all sorts of things seem to have been through multiple loops of auto-translate and then tweaked, so it's insane that it keeps coming up with new ways to misspell or change the name of things. The mc's name, techniques, jutsus, etc. Weirdly enough I think only the mc's name is ever wrong, the rest of the character names are consistent. It's annoying enough that even if you regularly deal with mtl you'd give up deciphering what random word is actually the mc's name this time.

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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

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