Reviews of Naruto: The Great Swordsman
Naruto: The Great Swordsman
Navy_King
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The english is good that's probably the only positive thing i found about this ff. (I read first 5 chaps and just skipped lots of chaps just to check if it gets better but nope) 1. The mc is giving edgy emo vibes 2. It feels like the author made the characters lose some iq and slightly altered their personalities 3. Everything is 'coincidentally' or 'conveniently' happening that other readers and I easily knew how the story is gonna flow (what mc will do and stuff like that) 4. The mc is one of those anoyying types of characters the 'OP mc that has 0 ambitions/dreams and just wants a "normal life" but the world won't allow him to enjoy being "normal"' like srsly he has 100% dracule's powers and his sword but he just wants to marry a "normal" woman and have a child (the strength is only to protect them) but for some reason he doesn't quit being a ninja bcz it's the only way for him to earn money so he gets dragged into the plot.... If anybody wants exact details just ask me and I'll answer
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Its always annoying when author is unfamiliar with source material, worse when the MC is a edgy teenage wanna be with a dead face and defective mind. He wont change cannon because he is so aloof and superior to these trivial things while he also have unsatiable itch to show off at every turn as long the the plot stays the same. He doesnt even know how obito MS works and gave up as soon as he turn intangible since there's nothing he could do *go cry about it* I'm not even gonna mention INO worse than 10x sakura level stalking.
I am writing this without any bias at all towards anything the writing quality is good and the way author writes story is good generally its good compared to most fics but the raters only made the rating low because in their opinion fics like this are bad i am rating his story not what he is writing about
I hope this gets updated more frequently. Absolutely love the skills he has since I’m a big fan of both Shanks and Mihawk. Also I’m still wondering what happened to the other story you had? The ending made it seem like the Main Character was going to a new world but after that it was just completed and there’s no sequel either.
only two things if you as an author writing this mainly for stones then i understand why so little chapters. usually you would feel the urge to write other novels right? because not enough stones.hehe but if you are a real writer , i want you to write with your heart and just ignore the stones and give it your best at least for one novel.
