HolyOniiSama
First of all, the grammar has quite a few mistakes but it is somewhat manageable. However the story itself is not too much to my taste and it had way too many inconsistencies in power skills and logical thinking so I will give this I want to store review. And honestly even if the story was good I saw that there are multiple people in here (possibly aliases for the author in different accounts, who knows?...) who posted a five-star review many many times one after the other... So to balance things out I would have felt it is my obligation to post a one-star review anyway...
one of the best translations I have read, like a Chinese novel if it is translated correctly there will be no spelling mistakes, also with a good mc that develops constantly. The only thing I could say is wrong is how the power of the bloodline develops because the tour does not turn me, it cannot shake the space from the beginning but otherwise a very good novel, I recommend it. (Google translator)
While this is terrible piece of trash I'm actually amaze how author turned naruto world into xianxia lol... All the youngmaster, chainvillains, courting death cliches aside... he even turn the powersystem into xianxia cultivation by making MC practise 8 inner gate and with by unlocking each each gate permantly he equal it to each cultivation break through. Like when mc open 1st gate he can break C rank jusu, when he open 2rd gate he can break B rank, 3rd gate low A rank, 4th gate mid A rank. Its actually hillarious since if you change the names of country, people and spells he could write a generic xianxia novel lol..
Just awfully bad with the changes to the story line dealing with the 8 gates and the situation with minato and his wife. While also say that there will still be a naruto when that is virtually impossible because the namesake came from there relationship with the pervy sage which also came because minato was his student without that where the name naruto come from. Then to have Konan,Yahiko, and the other dude he trained by the mc instead of Jariya was basically the last straw
pls tell me how do i give stability of updates 6 stars.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
typical chinese writer. ................................................................................................................-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- .-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- .-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- .-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- .--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------