Reviews of Naruto secret world

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honestly; this book had an interesting premise but the main character becomes crazy op in almost no time at all. he's more powerful than the kages by chapter 30 or so. The pacing could be a lot better, don't be afraid to go on a more detailed and slower journey.

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The story is good but when there as a chapter that don’t existe the 19 well you know there is a problème because we don’t now why is not there so for me better to just quit that continues and don’t now

a história não é ruim, só é mau escrita e cheia de furos de roteiro ,a história se perde em vários ocasiões, de ser por inexperiência do outro, pois o conceito por trás da narrativa é interessante, nas mãos de um autor qualificado poderia ser uma grande obra, mas por conta desses pontos só fica como média pra baixo.

Forced interactions and cringe dialogues hurt my soul but when I think that this novel is like a fever dream I feel better and thinks that it's hella good.

one of the interesting and original idea I have read recommended to begginers

Your chapters are missing where is chapter 19?

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the story was pretty good👍, and the merging of the different worlds was also done very well, the ending was a bit cliche but overall a good read

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After reading this fanfic. I have to say one thing that this fanfic is:-

Penulis, Kenapa Novelmu tidak ada Terjemahannya? kenapa penulis? tolonglah dibuatin Terjemahannya dikarya novelmu ini, soalnya sudah saya cari digoogle, tapi gak ada...

All you need to do is read to chapters 1 - 5 and you’ll understand

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I am a person who is not too serious in judging stories as long as the story makes me comfortable to read it then I will give a good rating Keep spirit

Thoroughly enjoyed your fanfic and look forward to your future work. Don't listen to the haters and let them get you down. Although there were some grammer mistakes it didn't make the story unreadable. Excellent work author

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