Indie131998
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You know what, this fanfict had given me a lot of nostalgic feeling unlike other Naruto fanfict that straight out giving off full power straight from the start, this one gave a feeling that the plot is well-thought along with superb writing quality. Give it a try if you were once a Naruto fan or are Naruto fan. Its been long since I found a new novel worth supporting. Keep up the good work author, please don't drop it and I will stone you as much as I can :)
Your writting quality is great but that pink banshee need a wake up call. She needs to slapped by reality.Even in the original just after she completed the seal she thought she was on par with a guy with eternal mangekyo and a jinchuriki of 9 tails who also happens to be a sage. I get its she is strong but she only knows tiajutsu. Imagine that banshee yelling and trying to punch sasuke just to be turned to ashes by Kirin. That banshee wanted to fight Madara who was the jinchuriki of 10 tails and the guy who butchered 5 kages without breaking a sweat and i know for sure that bitcu cant last 1 minute against 5 kages. Overall its a good story but its that same naruto and i am not getting a vibe that can make me wait for the next update. Anyway good luck Sir.
A good fanfic where it is not only about an alpha male which makes trouble here and there and gets every girl between his legs As for the story itself there are some parts which needs polishing but in all it is OK As for the Idea of having Naruto travel back in Time which his Soul/consciousness is similar to TDG but it is great the best is that he directly goes after Hinata now and not for Sakura
Ok the Writing is good bat I see you are trying to power busting the eyes boy but I see no improvement on the MC or the girl he loves he can power her up but no! Why? The MC need a strong woman and I see that he will get to but all I see is the team of the MC is getting power up not his woman's why? Sow after these Attempts to the Village help his wife's get stronger ok 😁👍🙏 and that is all for the day
Well... For people who write orig. Novels here, your one of the best writers I've seen! I mean is that your writing is so clean and even gives an interesting vibes while retaining the original character's characteristics. The writing is clean to be honest! I like the fact the way story flow, not too fast nor too slow. I give this novel a big thumbs up 👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏽👍🏾👍🏿👊🏻👊👊🏼👊🏽👊🏾👊🏿
I like the nature naruto is depicted in this however it would be a bother if he is someone who wont take any lives so even though he wants to save lives i hope that doesnt control him. And one thing i like is it wont be harem. Since its naruto with memories it just wouldnt seem right and also im tired of harem stories.
Writing quality is good, Updates, nothing to say about that Story development, a little disappointed in how the story has been going for while, Character design, close to the originals but recently personality wise it's getting farther away from the originals, as for whether it good or not we will see how it goes, everyone has a different opinions and views World Background, is ok, there are new things added to it that make it bit more interesting
This novel, is a very good and accurate adaption of the Naruto world. The character development seems very plausible and not to hurried. It has a fun feel and keeps the type of character at the end of the manga in mind when taking account of his actions. Great novel, worth reading!! One of the better fanfics I have read.
This story is really great!!!!!!!! I'm loving every chapter. The story will make your imagination run flawlessly as if watching the anime in your head. If you are hoping to read a great story with familiar background. I highly recommend this story for you. I've experience the difficulty of finding interesting story to read so I'll help you. Read this!
i honestly wish this version of naruto was shown instead of the original version. dont get me wrong a MC who grows up, learns his mistakes etc is is the normal way a MC should develop. and i did get a bunch of laughs from narutos antics in the anime and manga. but i have always been a fan of MC going back into the past and changing things for the better. plus i do like the mature version of naruto better. i just wish he would grow a pair and add karin. I have always felt bad for her. she never really got her chance to find love either .