Ok the Writing is good bat I see you are trying to power busting the eyes boy but I see no improvement on the MC or the girl he loves he can power her up but no! Why? The MC need a strong woman and I see that he will get to but all I see is the team of the MC is getting power up not his woman's why? Sow after these Attempts to the Village help his wife's get stronger ok 😁👍🙏 and that is all for the day
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