Reviews of Naruto: Family System

"With a SYSTEM" story.

The story is actually much better than expected. It's about some guy who gets a system that makes him stronger but only if his family the Uchiha Clan is prospering. Has lot of politics and fighting, the system seems mediocre but the mc strength is ridiculous so fights are never really close. It's kind of Wish fullfillment but not that strongly so it's only a bit cringe. Only read if you like Naruto fanfictions

Support the real author this guy is claiming another author works as his own. He isn't even crediting the original author of his work. The original Chinese novel is called "Konoha: Make Uchiha Great Again"

at least translate it properly, it's no different from reading mtl. fkng thief deserve to die

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It's impressive the quality of writting of this author, like you read thousands of words like brezee. everything here deserve 5 stars maybe the updates are little slower but still acceptable considering the quality of the writing.

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Bruh don't care if it's copied it's better than the Original even if just a Little people be giving 1 Star for no reason y'all don't know how to rate or Something did you Read the rating Thing the update Stability is prety good that alone makes this a 2 Star minimum story the background of the World could use some Improvement s charachter design to story Development I give it 3 Stars Writing quality 3 Stars better than the og but still not that good background I give 4 Stars Design also I give 3 Stars total is 3.8 stars

I tried to read through an autotranslator and I didn't like there's too much Chinese there, it's better the guy will translate and replace the Chinese

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People are saying this guy copied someone else's work... But where is the original one?? I can't seem to find it.. Is it still the same name- "Naruto: family system"??. Someone help me find the real one.. Preferably the translated one...i really love this ff😇🖖♥️

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just amazing and no morei am really excited for the future plot🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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i've read ch 90, and i proudly say it great story to read. The more you read the more you will be captivate by it's unique, given reader new perspective about how to see konoha from inside a clan, with the MC taking care of the clan, not run away from it or let's other people manage it.Hope Author always healthy so he can give us a lot chapter, God bless you !!!

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Thanks for the story so far. My only comment would be the pacing isn't as good as it could be. Being much more concise with the scenarios would help them go by quicker. I really think I could read this again and find many sections that could be removed or shortened and this development of the last chapter would continue making complete sense. That in essence is my criticism. You could simply want to write a story about and are interested in the events as they unfolded. But personally as a reader I think it took way too many chapters. The fun of the fights is a bandaid to that, but in the end became part of the problem when they too distracted and padded out so many chapters. Still, like I said, I did enjoy the story so thanks for sharing it. I'm looking forward to what seems like an obvious second part of the story. The build-up, and then the secret being out/a large change introduced causing ripples.