Reviews of Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
Reili
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Yeah i enjoyed this up untill the author ruiend the romance part. Screwing over lyrica, an a hole love interest like nan tian. Hate those types dropped many novels cause of such characters. Shiro is bloodthirsty at the beginning then all of a sudden she gets all lovey dovey. Thanks for screwing this awesome book over
The main problem that I find is that Lyrica seems to be ignored by Shiro for the later parts of the story. While at first it's fine since we know that Shiro wants to deal with the problems in the future but when Nan Tian appears she starts thinking about a relationship with him... If Nan Tian actually spent more time with Shiro at the beginning of the story I wouldn't have minded so much however when they first met he stalks her.. It's later explained that this was romantic advice given to him by others but its still creepy no matter how you look at it. After he leaves we don't see him again until a few hundred chapters in which he just communicates through a laptop. After another long while he finally appears and this time pursues her despite only knowing her for a little while and remembering that 'hey aren't you that one kid that saved me.' Despite there being a lot of hints in the previous chapters that Lyrica might have a chance, the Author suddenly kicks her aside when this happens. At this point I'll probably drop the novel because of this build up and sudden change. If at one point Shiro actually realizes that if the situation with Lyrica continues their friendship might suffer, I'll probably come back to it. I'd just rather the Author not drop hints at the beginning and then suddenly change their mind in the later parts because it just ruins it for some readers. Anyway, I'm currently at 610 something chapters, are there any improvements in the recent chapters? If there's any spoilers about the end results for Shiro's relationship I'd appreciate some.
I like this story but I want to like it more. I read up to ch 800 but the writing style completely changes from the beginning. It gets really strange and the emotions feel weird to read. I think too many characters get added, and not enough time is spent with the original characters. Shiro always says that they need to experience not being with her but she said that for about 500 chapters. She has kids and barely spends a chapter with them every 100 chapters.I couldn't care less about the new characters that get introduced. in the trials becaouse I won't ever see them again. I would rate it 5 stars if i only read the first 200 chapters but the writing style changes to much and it just gets hard to read.
Author hasn’t regularly updated in like 6 months, so I‘m just going to give a final review? This was one of my favorite stories on Webnovel. Honestly love the author since both novels were bangers. Atleast for the most part. The story started off at a god tier. However, it started to fall apart around the time the MC officially became a god. The story was setup for Yuri, but threw a ML curve ball out of nowhere. In addition, the story just felt that it was being forced. It could have been ended many chapters, but here we are with no conclusion and pratically a 6 month hiatus. Character design was great, world back ground was amazing, writing quality is peak Webnovel, but story development went from a 5 to a 1.
Absolutely love this novel. It has great character development and world building. The quality of the book only goes up from the first chapter. Only thing I have against this book it frequency of updates. At first it was great but towards the last few chaps the author look a long time to update. I think it was like 3 or 4 months between chaps and at the time of this post its been 20 something days since last update. I understand that there might be extenuating circumstances thats keeping the author from posting and if thats the case, drop and auxiliary chap and just let us fans know that you maybe taking a break from writing for health or for family reasons. Otherwise alot of fans (not me personally but other fans. I'm currently going through my 4th re-read of the available chaps cuz I can't get enought of Shiro and the gangs hilarious hijinks lol) are going to start treating this thing as a dropped novel. As a fellow writer just thought I'd give you some friendly advise. Anyways hope you come back soon author cuz I can't wait to see what happens next!
The writing is pretty okay, just average. The story is about a reincarnated girl who lives for vengeance. It started great, but the author dropped a massive spoiler. from ch 400+ there's really nothing to look forward for anymore, no more mysteries to unveil. It's just mindless grinding and levelling. The character design are lazy AF. Nothing original, your typical cardvoard cutouts. Nobody engages for the MC to be a better person nor challenges her. They're all so dependent on the MC and they didn't even try to hide that. The World Background is dull AF. So Basically the world with dungeons and new lands. So it's really confusing because the author never elaborate on that fact, which breaks the immersion.
I'm going to be blunt and give you the good and the bad, starting with the bad. While I am really enjoying the story, it's grammatically broken in so many ways. It's not so bad that it's not readable, but the author desperately needs an editor that is fluent in English. I'd say, on average, there are at least 2 typos/grammatical errors in every paragraph. Mixing up past and present tense is a constant, words are used improperly, etc. "Was" and "were" are not interchangeable. "Pass" is not a substitute for "past" or "passed". "Redundant" does not mean what the author thinks it means. "Though" and "thought" are constantly mixed up. Most cultural phrases or saying are quoted wrong. Some stuff is just simply odd, such as "xyz character scratches their HAIR in confusion". Seriously, the list could go on forever as it's a grammatical nightmare. Now, on to the good. The characters are very interesting and there is great character development, though I'd like to see more internal group drama/interactions. The overall story is easy to get into and has excellent pacing, making it easy to binge dozens of chapters at a time. It's over the top in a carefree and fun kind of way but is balanced with occasional heavy scenes that give it more weight. While I would like a little more descriptions regarding some of the cities, it's actually very well done. An atmosphere is established for various scenes that helps build immersion. Even the political climate is touched on and affects the direction of the story. My advice for the author would be to download the Grammarly browser extension and write in google docs (as Grammarly functions there). This will not only catch a lot of mistakes, but in the process of correcting them, the author will become more fluent in English. Also, it's free.
