Reviews of My Knowledge Of Cultivation Is Completely Shattered

It's damn funny how the author keep crushing the MC. And the mc too keep getting crushed by the new World development. Breaking the 4th wall is taking it to an another level. I can't stop laughing now. Anywho, on to the actual review, grammar is good. The plot is unique as it took an interesting take in cultivation, there's also not as many clichés. All in all, I recommend reading.

The world building is slightly different from the typical cultivation novel. As opposed to a more eastern fantasy type of style, it has some element of Hindu with chakra which is a nice breath of fresh air after seeing countless cultivation novels that start to sound the same.

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This book tries to give a fresh outlook on cultivation, instead of the usual Chinese cultivation systems we are quite familiar with, we are thrown into the cultivation method that originated from India. We get Chakra instead of Qi or Auras and certainly a lot more worldbuilding. I certainly applaud the Author for going in this direction as it is a fresh take on cultivation. I do recommend, as the Author already promised to do... is finding a compatible writing style to use. Improving the narrative will do wonders with this book!

It captures alot from the start even tho the reading quality is abit off with the grammer its more than readable, think you should give this a try you will not be dissapointed. GL and hope this becomes in a webtoon soon in the future GL DUDE!

This is the first time i saw a mc trampled so much by the others. The idea is great and refreshing, total opposite to the norm of all-knowing, all-powerful mc. Great job auther

Nice story and world background Hero parents are overpowered character One a knight the other a magician Hero gonna learn both as become the most good I guess.

There are too many cuts in the paragraphs you may need to check if it's the word doc that's causing this but since this is your first time making this, improvements are still applicable, the use of emojis is a surprise to me since I've never seen a story yet with it. In the end, it's a unique experience to see writing like this I like it.

Okay, your title says it all. Your synopsis short, you night want to add to it, something catchy that would make your readers want to plunge themselves in and have a good read. Well it sure is a different setting for the cultivation genre. Its not Chinese this time but Indian and all our, well the MC's knowledge about cultivation goes kaboom. Writing quality is okay for your first time. You would need to edit your book. There are grammatical errors, little typos and you need to rearrange your work when you have transferred from word doc. Inkstone has a way of scattering it, trust me I know. Anyway nice plotline, I like the difference, keep it up. Good work you would improve and be better. 👍👍

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