Review Detail of Sandwich_Author in My Knowledge Of Cultivation Is Completely Shattered

There are too many cuts in the paragraphs you may need to check if it's the word doc that's causing this but since this is your first time making this, improvements are still applicable, the use of emojis is a surprise to me since I've never seen a story yet with it. In the end, it's a unique experience to see writing like this I like it.