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My Fight (Shen Yue SI)

Author: Verynew
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A guy was reincarnated (into Tales of Demons and Gods) as Shen Yue, without a cheat.

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"I will show what I will do to you if you disobey me as you are not liking my good side", he shouted at me and I was shivering by seeing his dangerous glaring eyes which held no remorse. He was cold, arrogant and has no emotions. He dragged me by holding my wrist tightly which is already bruised, with stumbling feet I followed him as he is walking fast. I cant catch up with his speed as I fall down he left my hand and glared at me. I cower back in fear as what he will do to me. I was shivering and crying very badly by seeing him. "I will make your life hell because of what you did to me. I will never forget and forgive for your mistakes, Get that in your head. You will pay for your sins and God will never forgive you. You are a murderer", He spilled venom through his mouth and dragged me on the floor from living hall to the kitchen. I am feeling pain in every part of my body but I cant open my mouth as fear crept inside me and my body became numb. He lifted me up by my shoulders but my body is weak as I cannot stand by myself and leaned onto him.I want to say I cannot bear his tortures anymore. But before that he held my right hand and placed it in the hot water as it was on the stove. I screamed in horror, pain and have no words left my mouth. "Ah...ahh... ahh mumma", I screamed loudly as it was unbearable and I pushed the pan from the stove and it fell down opposite side with the boiling water. "Please lea..ve me, I am rea...lly so sorry dont do thiiis, I will obey your orders Sir", I stuttered as he held my left hand more tightly. As I was feeling dizzy I leaned onto him by holding his shoulder with my right hand. I thought this will be my last day on mother earth. Unstoppable tears flowed through my eyes. "Please help me, let me die in peace", As I uttered those words by staring at him directly, darkness consumed me. *Caution : Mature Content* *This is my First story. Please forgive me for any grammatical mistakes Please vote and comment.*

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gamly33
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Got to say this story is way better then the original story. Nie Li always took the "it's best to get the best things for me and I'll give some people good bits" this way of doing things always annoyed me no end. for one why take a good thing when you could make a better thing? and two once got the good he may very well throw it away because of a weird reason. three he was always in a rush never perfecting a skill or thing but making it "good enough for now" so the story plot can continue. four Nie Li dose not learn. oh he goes to school's or library's but is so sure to that the four/five topics he know and not need anything else. 😞😞😞🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️ in short this story is way better then the original story 🤣🤣🤣

VamPyr00
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Very well done by the author. This story was, honestly, much better than I expected for the amount of reviews and the cover/synopsis. The story itself is extremely interesting and many unique ideas on cultivation and inscriptions. The writing STYLE is a bit strange though. Reads a bit like the author has a list and is just TELLING you everything. This is a problem many authors have but still, well done overall. Writing Quality: 5*, pretty good with few errors. Story Development: 4*, it focuses a bit too much on the MC's research without actually moving the story along but at least it is interesting. Character Design: 4*, the characters seem a bit flat but that can be blamed partially on how short the story is for now. World Background: 5*, author goes pretty in depth about knowledge, cultivation, and inscriptions, which was kind of glossed over in the original story. Overall: 4.6*, I recommend this to anyone just looking for an interesting new perspective on the world of Tales of Demons and Gods.

The_Airojab
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Writing Quality : 5* Stability of Update : 3* Story Development : 1* Character Design : 1* World Background : 1* Managed to read every chapter that has been released and I'm still confused as I have no idea on what I have read so far.

DoomBot35
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