Reviews of Mother Goddess

I really love everything, but just reminds me of my english skills. >.< I don't really understand everything, but from wat I do undersand, everything seems great! Duh, Keqing would make everthing better, but yeah! Relly good!

Great story! The characters were well developed, and I truly really like the main character's personality! The characters are all very interesting, and I'm looking forward towards finding out more about their backgrounds. The plot also seems very cool... I also look forward to finding out more about the background of the story!

I feel like it's cool. I love the overall design, and basically everything. What I don't like is the fact that the author made her very strong and stuff. That doesn't make room for improvement. Or maybe I'm just wrong, and she has things to improve. But anyways, yeah. And also, she's strong, ye, but like she blacks out 2 times in 2 chapters? I'm surprised at that, and I hope blacking out doesn't become the norms. Otherwise, great story, continue. NOTE: I read your it's always the teachers book, it was good. The writing style was changed, but that's cool. Both writing styles were good. It's just different. You keep at it with the strong main female characters

Dis is cool. I'm looking forward towards new chapters. 2 chapters is way too short. Everything's great, though I'd want to have more of a story development. I'm not going to criticize or anything, though. Your writing is way better than mine. Well, overall good. Hoping for new chapters!

GODDESS!!!! I'm telling you, Phoenix is a goddess! Independent, strong woman! I'd say she do be rock'n her black hanfu. SIMP. Obviously she's not as cool as winnie the poo (cuz winnie's the best), or as hot as Beidou or Lisa, but I mean.... She's hot. GODDESS. I'm surprised she's not one of the archons, lol.

This is a really good book! The style of writing is really cool, and the fact that the author came up with this (original) is so cool! There's the fact that she blacked out twice (O.o), but otherwise it's a really good story! Can't wait for more! I also really hope there is a romance, but so far idk. Scaramouche and Zhongli both seem.... non favorable towards Phoenix. Hope the author writes more chapters soon!