This is an interesting book that I would defiantly continue if I had the time. Though the name of the main character isn't specified in the first two chapters, I would say it's a good book <- this might be intentional. Please update more as I have the tendency to drop books that don't have a lot of chapters. There's also the fact about Elly's reverse harem. Out of all the books I've read, never have I encountered a reverse harem. I had to search it up in order to find out that a person with four significant others that agree to 'share' existed. This is an interesting new experience and I would like to see more of Elly's development in the the story.

I would like to think about what what've happened if the room didn't shake and they didn't get ambushed. What would've happened? Would the main character loose control? Or calm down and restrain herself? Sometimes imagining these things is the most fun part in reading books. Also, while writing this comment, I've come across the fact that I currently do not know the main character's name. Author, if you are reading this, please update and add the characters name. I apologize if this is intentional and I'm digging too much.

Dis is cool. I'm looking forward towards new chapters. 2 chapters is way too short. Everything's great, though I'd want to have more of a story development. I'm not going to criticize or anything, though. Your writing is way better than mine. Well, overall good. Hoping for new chapters!

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