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first time reviewer, this book has a well thought out story and concept filled with references from things in real life. its a very good book that I recommend you should try if you want a decent reincarnation or MMORG novel with a slight twist and actually well thought out the quality is very good occasionally every couple of chapters you'll find a error misplacing he/she or something else but overall high quality updates are very stable usually 1 chapter a day, unless real life problems occur but they are rare, however the author often will do 2 if certain goals are met regarding golden tickets or other things. The story is developing well and is well thought out, most things make sense and yes sometimes there's a lucky coincidence however its pretty tame, there are a tiny few differences in things from the beginning to how they play out further in however its nothing major. character design is probably the weakest, its ok but not amazingly descriptive as the author doesn't really go out their way too describe everything about the character, usually its just enough to get the general gist of what they look like while leaving it a bit up to the imagination. World background is pretty good the author describes it in a way where you get the general gist of the world while leaving open certain parts as a twist for further down the story.
I adore this story!!! I'm about at the 90 chapter mark, but so far I've loved the plot! Unlike other stories who try and create a magic levelling system, which quickly becomes irrelevent in a matter of chapters, this author manages the systems very well, and also incorporates them in an interesting society, and economy. Touching on how the real world adapts to this new system, and how it affects the MC's decisions and his troubles. I can't think of any plot holes at the moment, however the author's writing style can be seen as clunky quite often, but never takes away from the story's atmosphere. Overall a really good story! Thank you to the author for bringing me a story unlike many others, and one I am obsessed with. I do not usually spend coins on stories, but this one made me bring out my wallet.
An incredible, well structured story, although the start may feel underwhelming, i fully recommend continuing with the story, as the protagonist matures and puts sets higher goals for himself. The characters are very realistic, and you can see yourself and others on them, and the balance of the main story and the romantic life of MC is pretty well balanced. The upload schedule is pretty standard for the site, but author does constant mass releases when the goals are met. Although to be fair, the grammer isn't the best and sometimes is too informal for my liking, but i can see an improvement over time. Just give it a try. Finally, the story is well structured, it has it's cliché parts and original ones, overall a fresh read.
I rly hope the author will read this. So I’m at the alliance with the russian mafia and the Elites are about to go to war and I‘m starting to get boree which is a shame considering the potential here. Naruto lost sasuke and then 3 years timeskip Luffy lost his crew and his brother and 2y timeskip Goku died and came back stronger Fairy tail lost to Acnologia and came back 7 years later Gon lost a friend (silver haired dude) Midoriya lost All might (when he lost all his powers) Shakuni has been winning non-stop. And while it’s good, there is no more suspense. I know he is going to win some way or another. Like here for example, the shut in trilionaire who was hiding in the dark. He was the perfect way to at least make them lose a bit. You gave him all the necessary means to do so and the hype was real. But he’s about to be taken down so easily which is a waste in my opinion. Please have them lose at some point. Maybe a perma death, so Raj has to start over but with cultivation from the start?
I started reading this book and couldn't stop, I wanted nothing more than to read this book since the day I found it. I am always checking to see if there is a new chapter so I could read more. I spent so much money on this book but honestly the author deserves it for the amazing book they created. I highly recommend people to read this.
Generic plot Same vrmmo concept. However, the main character has a somewhat unique personality and the fight descriptions are very well-written. The only thing I would have a problem with is the lack of chapters. If only there were a few hundred more to binge read instead of waiting. I planned to wait a few weeks before reading more but the story is just too good that I cannot stop myself, especially with the second guild war is on its way. I am so hyped! ♥️
I was honestly really surprised by this book. I even decided to purchase coins just to buy this author gifts. ( I am a student while working part-time so al the money I give is earned by myself) At first I didn't really expect much... Was just making fun of the clichés in the the story and see where the story would bring us at certain times I felt like the author was just trolling us back (chubby sidekick out of nowhere) because we would keep complaining about stupid stuff (like using the word beautiful to describe a female) and throw GIFs whenever. I am not far in the story (Chapter 35) but I really respect the author for interacting and listening to the readers. I really like that the Mc is a flawed person (character development), who isn't almighty just because he reincarnated. He does some stupid stuff which seems harmless but brings him in a lot of trouble. I like the fact that even though it is his second life everything doesn't go his way and he needs to learn how to adapt to the situation. It makes the story much more interesting. I just gifted 500 coins because I really enjoyed the story. Even though I am not planning on acting like a gold-master I do plan on rewarding the story a few more times if it keeps my interest. So author FIGHTING ☆d(o⌒∇⌒o)b
the English in the beginning is a bit messy but if you go to chapter 50 and up it gets better . the updates are good it's frequent and the quality doesn't drop. the story is amazing and it has the good amount of ways it can go, it can go very dark and serious but there are also bits where the author tries to make jokes. the characters are amazing you get a good grasp of what there like and how the look so you can image it better in your head the world background is alright i mean it's a bit typical in the beginning but further down the line it does have a good plot twist for the world.