HikaruKiki
I really enjoy summoning systems, so really forward to how this progresses! Hopefully the mc won't become too op and don't worry your English if fine. Granged, there are slight grammar mistakes but they don't hamper the understanding and flow of the story by much. Also appreciate the speedy releases, good job wordsmith!
had potential but fall off hard. MC is lacking in Self Awareness and his attempt at being deep and understanding of the cruel human nature seems laughable and hypocritical.Like when he belittles desperate people who just wants to live.I understand he owes them nothing but dude if u didn't have the garbage plot armor cheat u would be begging the same.
okay I'm in the current chapter and I must say that the author has grown for a writer although this is his first book he has done very well the story is progressing smoothly, the grammar is readable with few mistakes and the mc is definitely an mc. people should give it a try and he updates frequently. only thing needed is more chapters to clear out some things as the author has a bigger plan for this book
okay if you are looking for character development and a Smart mc then look no further also this book has slice of life and kingdom building the kingdom building is really good and the characters have Life in them give the book a try the beginning might not seem all that but it gets really good good is an understatement it gets crazy
I’m just got up to the last available chapter and I like how the story is progressing. The main character is similar to Han Jue from Top tier providence and that he is cautious and not overly arrogant while his knowledge of the grenral trends of mc novels makes him like the villain Mc who knows how these chosen ones act. Unlike some novel where the character has a cheat and starting letting his desire out. I enjoy the start of this novel and hope you continue to publish more chapters.
2nd 5-star review I will give on my time on this site, the story is real and doesn't have the logic of Chinese people the grammar is really good, I didn't find a single problem with how the system operates and the Mc is Op but other people are also very strong enough to kill him even if he tries his best, overall not the worst story I've read at least top 100 of the novels I've read, keep up the good work author and can someone notify me when it reaches 100 chapters, thanks!!
When I first saw this novel I thought it would be bad because of that name but I was really surprised how author was able to make it to be really enjoyable but whats more he have stable release which is something you dont see everywhere. And I was able to see how author grow in his writing his characters have good character evolution
Good story but dumb writer...MC is OP and all but what the f**k is with 2000 attributes difference in all aspect but still can't fight a level 10 player with 20 attributes...I am so bored...I think MC is not MC but his talent is his just a puppet...If you like to pass time this is a OK OK novel but you want a nice novel go somewhere else...For me is 1 star for characters
Hikaru San. Although your concerns about the story being displayed somewhere else is valid and very real, if I may suggest keeping the chapters under the 13 coin threshold does help as broken readers as myself will rather consider using ads or other stories instead of using so many coins or fast passes to read one chapter. I personally like the story but the latest “arc” per say deviated a little bit too far from what hook me up to the story to begin with. Maybe you should consider what brought your readers initially and develop from there if you are targeting to be popular and getting return for your invested time.