No Transmigration
there are no words to describe there sheer level of what just happened with this story. up till chapter 70 everything is going good, typical mc very op, Yada Yada Yada then boom, story becomes one piece fanfic and never ever recovers. I'm reading it free and feel deep deep sadness over anyone that spent coins on this. please don't get pulled into this trap.
Story completely changes after chapter 70. One moment the MC is playing a game on Earth, the next moment he is transmigrated into the game with no fore warning. It's like the author got hit by a bus, landed in coma and awoke only to have amnesia and continued writing thinking everyone is brain dead like him.
AS of chapter 70 Ther are many in My opinion major Problems with this novel. First IT Just jumps without any explanation to you could say a Modest 25 chapter Long Linda Fan-Fic one piece Story . After that where Back to the original Story that trys to answer way the 25 chapter happen't. Then there is the problem of complete Texts getting Copy Paste't From previous chapters in the novel .There easy to Spot because some Times they Talk AS If stuff that is Long gone is still Happening (the Demon Event). If the Problems i found don't geht fixed , im sorry but i'm going to drop this as it will be unreadable.
Please fix the chapters from 70 onwards. For the mistake to persist for so long.. much of the novel is them repeating words as well, like how the MC is lazy AF, or what each skill does, or even just the constant spam of dmg numbers which are useless.. i'd give it a star for the update stability and thata about it
I finally made it to chapter 6. normally I would wait until chapter 20 or more before leaving a review. This novel is... 😔 disappointing 😞. There is no character development. There is girls throwing themselves at the mc and guys hating the mc already. I'm sorry but everyone is just wasting their time reading this story.
Writing quality and story development I give 1 star as it is not very consistent the story seems to be jumping without proper transition it is messy overall especially in the ultimate hidden dungeon where he got sign-in system for whatever reason another reason is when he returned at the novice village where he meet hot girl it is like the start of story just with different characters it is more like a reenactment more than finding teammates Character design I give 3 as the characters are not bland they have feelings. The characters do not give me the feeling of dolls or mob that will be forgotten in a few chapters. World Background I give five stars as I like the concept and story it is somewhat new fresh I just do not like how the story is executed. Updating Stability I give 1 star I mean what do expect I do not see any stability