Reviews of Master of none

Right now, I'm mostly wondering if you have a map made for this world, as in my case that would greatly help the immersion and the understanding of the relations of the kingdoms based on location... I've been trying to keep track with a mental map but where I'm at now I see I must have made more than a few errors as I assumed a location was roughly North of Diamand as well as another roughly NorthWest, but the traversal between these two locations passes by diamond meaning my attempts to keep track of locations have failed... (kinda wish I had the mental archive skill) (I didn't name locations as some might see them as potential spoilers)

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This is a decent novel, many characters to root for. The system style here is quite unique and hope the MC acquires tons of skills. Hahaha. Needs a lot of editing though.

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This story is absolutely amazing, it's the first story in a long while to keep me so invested in a long time. The only reason I gave the world backgroud 4 out of the 5 five stars(I would say It's move 4.5 out of 5) is because the author hasn't gotten as in to that part of story/lore yet, since we've been getting tiny bits and pieces of it. The only real flaw is the fact that there are some minor plotlines mentioned but never really build on. My main example being the fact that the author wrote a chapter and mention Su having an interest in a musician from the church. But even with that, considering how long the book is, it makes since that some of them would have no follow up.

This book is so good

First of all I'd just like to say I am thoroughly enjoying this novel. Secondly, I was just wondering is romance going to be established between the characters? I personally am a big fan of the romance genre and would just like to know if that's something that I can look forward to in the latter chapters.

Really good book. Grammer could do some work, small stuff like Capitalize proper nouns, make it so you know who's speaking. World is unique as everyone has there own system that helps them grow. MC is still young and wants to learn, pretty smart. Has room to grow. Still learning about the world. MC has a nice group to grow with.

Noice

A good and entertaining novel. The MC is quite reckless but it perfectly fits his age. Writing quality is average to below average. There are spelling mistakes and some bad grammatical errors.

Good read overall could use a large amount of editing as it can get a bit choppy to read some times most of the time you can get the meaning of what is supposed to be said but get past that and it's an enjoyable story with fairly good world building about a world with most people having a system related to something e.g bakers system, hero system ect the mc has a jack of all trades system and can learn skills from any other "class" equip tools or items of any category.

it is a very good book. ....................................................................................................................

So far so good. It is well thought out and appears to have a good plot and idea in mind. It is nice that the other characters aren't bland or stupid. Personally I think the story is progressing.a bit to fast. Other than that slight issue it is pretty good. :)

one of the best novel I have read recommended for all reader .The end.yrbfijwdxhdbcuybybcyeicnedncjedcercercecercecgvtfcrgcdceddecectvrtvrtvrtvrtvtvrtvr

very good

A very good novel, a little bit childish sometimes and heartwarming others times, easy to read, the down that I can think is that it doesn't show a lot of the secondary characters once the protagonists end their job. You will not regret giving a shoot to this novel if you like that kind of novel.

I like this new view on system story it's refreshing. The world background is also well develope with new type of monster. The only downside in my mind is that Walker could be a bit more egoist (his party gain a lot from him and his system), but that is just my preference. (I am french so if my grammar is bad i am sorry).

It really like it so I'm just gonna give you 5 stars.................................................................................................................................