Reviews of Master Of Martial Arts Has An Advanced Optical Brain
Master Of Martial Arts Has An Advanced Optical Brain
Eight O'clock At Night
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- Translation Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
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alright, no real surprises. bit of a Mary Sue MC as he'll make a breakthrough then next chapter have some new threat which his breakthrough happens to perfectly counter. no real issue with the writing, but the translator doesn't seem to understand the n't suffix (so the above sentence would be written: the translator does seem to understand the suffix) it's not that big of an issue, but when you have to work out what is actually written in the middle of a scene, it's very annoying. this is a problem for doesn't couldn't wouldn't shouldn't etc.
It's a pretty good story overall but I dislike the fact that it's often slow paced and takes a lot of chapters before explaining information. Other than that, the development of the strenght of the character isn't really consistent or these kind of things since there is basically 100 chapters where he does random stuff around and then there's 1 chapter where he becomes 10 times stronger instantly instead of consistently improving. It's also annoying how it's mentioned every single chapter that the character will never breakthrough to the bla bla bla or he lost because they underestimated him or whatever and it becomes quite repeatitive a the end. It is still quite supportable and if you ignore that it's a pretty good novel compared to other I've read on the website.
If you read the mtl translations of this you would realize that this book is a bomber. with over seventeen thousand chapters everything is explained and the world building is extremely completed and almost everything seems like a plot hole until you read for at least another one hundred chapters. I regret finishing it in two weeks because now I'll have to find something to red that lives up to this. 10/10 would recomend
Leí esta novela hace un tiempo, tengo que decir que es muy buena, les recomiendo mucho que la lean, el protagonista tiene una buena personalidad, la construcción del mundo es muy buena, la novia también es muy buena, y la trama también es atrapante. los villanos también son muy bien construidos, y las explicaciones y ciencias ficción son muy estables. el final también es un 8/10. muy bueno.
I really hate this MC. Because of the plot armor, we see him being underestimated in every fight. And because of this, he never fight with his full strenght at the start. As soon as the MC start to loose, the plot armor kick in and the antagonist strats talking or he finally uses his brain and uses his cheat at its fullest. The MC should have been dead a long time ago.
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