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Master_of_Sleep
Master_of_SleepLv151yrMaster_of_Sleep

alright, no real surprises. bit of a Mary Sue MC as he'll make a breakthrough then next chapter have some new threat which his breakthrough happens to perfectly counter. no real issue with the writing, but the translator doesn't seem to understand the n't suffix (so the above sentence would be written: the translator does seem to understand the suffix) it's not that big of an issue, but when you have to work out what is actually written in the middle of a scene, it's very annoying. this is a problem for doesn't couldn't wouldn't shouldn't etc.

Master Of Martial Arts Has An Advanced Optical Brain

Eight O'clock At Night

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Master_of_Sleep
Master_of_SleepLv15Master_of_Sleep

separate to that, the fact the author needs to remind us of the AI every other paragraph is incredibly annoying.