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It's after a long time that I'm reviewing any story. ...however, as I feel this story wasted my enough time so why not give the review.....Author, I guess you have not proofread this otherwise silly mistakes could have been easily avoided. ML surname in story is different from description. FL to prove herself innocent of grandfather death's had assigned lawyer, who also not only proves her innocence but submitted the evidence of Antagonist crime, but later on, there is no mention of such in the novel. In fact, from time to time even ML and his family had also accused FL for such.
A brain dead FL. Falls into traps endlessly. The FL shows love to her child till she's born. Afterwards, she seems to vanish into thin air. FL insists she won't get back with her ex till the last chapter and suddenly in the last few lines the get together. Makes no sense at all. A waste of time reading this.
I had reviewed it when it was a trial read & now that it's finished I can say that it got even worse after 40 chapters. Aside from the many loopholes & skips in the plot (like FL was pregnant & then suddenly she wasn't? or did I miss something), the ending was rushed. We get a paragraph or so telling us that the villain was arrested for her crimes when it should've gotten more - like we deserved to see her downfall after putting up with chapters of her. Then, there's also a line or so saying FL & ML reconciled, which was to be excepted but that also should've gotten more chapters. I guess the writer got fed up with this story or something. Anyways, no, I don't recommend this to anyone, unless it's free & you want to waste time.
This is one of the most idiotic, poorly written novels I've come across on this site, and that's saying something. The only redeeming quality is quite a decent translation (grammar and phrases are on point). > FL is the dumb princess that fell in love when a man SMILED at her and forced him to marry her (not yet explained how in the novel), and then proceeded to sever ties with her family that treated her well and became a slave to the in-laws. Then apparently after FINALY finding some spine and common sense and leaving him, it all points to her going back to him. AGAIN. Like it's all water under the bridge. > ML who is supposed to be successful shrewd businessman, is in fact a dumb and abusive bully who might as well be blind and bi-polar with how he's treating people in his environment. Basically he doesn't know zilch about reading people, and does everything based on rumors.. how he can survive in business with such low EQ and IQ is beyond me. And the plot... boy, it could be a cheese with how many plot holes it has. > Author must still be in middle school with how juvenile and ridiculous this writing is. Let's dismiss the fact that somehow they all live in two separate cities but with author's writing it's more like one city since they visit/go out with each other with ease of crossing the street so to speak (even though FL needed a PLANE to go from one home to another), there's still the issue of author writing that the conclusive evidence is found in a murder case against a person who apparently gets to walk around free and ML doesn't seem to mind it and everybody just conveniently forgets about poor man that died > Honestly, If you can find any other novel at all to read, do skip this one, it's not worth the brain cells
Don't waste your breath, time & money on this book. The author couldn't distinguish names of characters or their genders. The ending was rushed with a total 180-degree turnaround plot, which didn't make sense. With so many questions left unanswered on the plot, it left the readers wondering how the author came to the conclusion on ending with no explanations. I would rate this book as 0. Waste of coins. Webnovel should reimburse the readers their coins for books like this & ban the authors. Or better yet, don't upload books like this. 🤬🤬🤬
The writer made the female lead look like a stupid and annoying woman when there is trouble and the brothers want to help ,she will be like I want to deal with it but instead of dealing with it she creates another trouble and yet she claims to solve it again .. .but another trouble crops up. ..it that not stupidity it has made reading the novel very annoying ,but wat can do I have already used money to purchase coins .sorry for my choice of words
This book is just terrible... The only thing good about it is the fl relationship with her family. Having that kind of family and been kidnapped and almost like 5 times, I can only say the FL is a big fool and she na got back together with her trash ex husband, what's that?!!! You had all the evidences you need against that wicked girl and you still fell for her trap... Really poor story development. Don't waste your time reading.