I had reviewed it when it was a trial read & now that it's finished I can say that it got even worse after 40 chapters. Aside from the many loopholes & skips in the plot (like FL was pregnant & then suddenly she wasn't? or did I miss something), the ending was rushed. We get a paragraph or so telling us that the villain was arrested for her crimes when it should've gotten more - like we deserved to see her downfall after putting up with chapters of her. Then, there's also a line or so saying FL & ML reconciled, which was to be excepted but that also should've gotten more chapters. I guess the writer got fed up with this story or something. Anyways, no, I don't recommend this to anyone, unless it's free & you want to waste time.
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