Reviews of Marvel universe 727

If you like reading terrible garbage comedy then this is the story for you.........................................................................................................................................................

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Not really a good fic mostly because it is a bit too cringing. The scenes with the possible love interest is unbearable. The comedy is dry. The weapon he got sucks and he combat abilities are nonexistent. Felt a bit forced that the MC ended up in USA when he started in Australia. Overall not a good fic and couldn't get passed chapter 13. If you like everything I don't, then this is the fic for you.

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Writing - 4 Updates - 4 Story - 5 Character - 5 World - 4 Writing is good and you can understand everything, but there are some grammar mistakes that you can look past Updates are pretty frequent so that's a plus The story is a good combo of action and comedy. Characters are interesting and unique The world is Marvel, but there is a big difference.

everything about this story is good... really good even. except for the 70% of the humor. its tasteless, childish, and lacks any imagination. the good thing is that's its only real downside.

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Great story. I mean really great. But as the author said, too lazy to make consistent updates. Its such a great story even though it is cringe at times. Grammar is great, well to my knowledge, and character and world development is even better. I hope that this gets more recognition and popular.

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Well written with a story you do think wouldn't work but actually does somehow. ............................................................

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Really loving this story, uh I don't know what else to put here.........................................................................................