Addyctive7
Alright I changed my mind about this story.I read it the second time because I always saw it at the top of the power ranking.- at first, the mc is an evil r*p*st and molester at the start but his treatment towards the girls got better after the civil war.(starting chapter 38 it gets better.)-the author have creative mind about the process of bonds but I have an issue about the power levels. specifically the 'cosmic level' like bro are u serious? cosmic level but can only destroy buildings?-also another issue or more like a question. why does he still haven't got Laura's regeneration skill and share it to his other host? i know he have his own regeneration that he use to heal his hosts but the more the merrier right? so, why he doesn't have it?-lastly, why In the f**k your patreon is so expensive? 😭 I can't afford it.anyways overall, a very good story. keep up the good work.
This is a little bland, 20ch in and nothing happened except the multiple earth thing. Concept is great, pacing is slow, chapters are a little repetitive, and the characters seem dumbed down. It would probably change in the future. but, it doesn't seem to be near with the pace this is going. It's better than most but worse than many so im'ma keep reading.
I basically never give any 5 star reviews to any works on Webnovel. This fanfic is one of the best works I've read on Webnovel in a while. I will continue to read this story for as long as the author is willing to write more chapters. As far as writing quality goes, there are a few typos here and there, as well as occasionally omitted words. It's still of a better overall writing quality as far as works on Webnovel usually go. The story development is unfolding fairly well as more chapters are posted. Character development is well executed on the characters whose personal development the author is actually focused on. Most other characters' development is about the same as can be found in similar works here. I love the world building so far, and the updating stability is solid.
What nonsense does he say that he does not want to merge with men, pathetic, so he loses the opportunity to obtain the power genes of men with powers, also the one on earth is only one of the clones, which is nonsense, the symbiotes also merge on the body inside and not just with clothes, it's weird
The Writing Quality of This Fanfic is good, there are minor to no spelling or grammar mistakes (As far as I noticed). The actual Story itself is good, the harem feels like it's actually part of the story unlike most fanfics I've read, it is not like annoyance, Simply put the harem does not take anything away from the story rather adds to the story. The idea itself of the story is something I am personally looking forwards to reading for a long time(the worlds all just have so much potential for story). if the author keeps up the story at a similar quality and doesn't add anything that changes the story to much (ofcourse no matter how good the idea is the concept is it will start getting boring for the readers after a hundred or two chapters, that is simply a challenge the author has to navigate through) Overall this story is good to read, I hope the Author keeps on uploading and doesn't stop or start taking breaks in the middle after slowly loosing interest in it as the story progress.
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symbiotic mc? hope it's like predatory in qq that was awesome, but based on your other story should be awesome, so here 5 star Very interesting, well written, I like that the MC is a symbiote who needs a host and has a system. It's much more interesting for a symbiote to grow powerful than a human, especially when he has access to the hive mind and can split off pieces of himself.