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Martial Peak: Fracture

Author: Paragen
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Read Martial Peak: Fracture fanfiction written by the author Paragen on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering action, adventure, reincarnation, weaktostrong, mystery. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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"NO! SISTER, WATCH OUT!" There was a shout, but no voice came out. 'H-Huh?!' Lich suddenly wakes up calling out his little sister who was supposed to get into a car accident, but unknowing to him, he had himself positioned right in front of it while pushing his sister to the safe side. 'D-Did I just died? I must have, otherwise, I would be waking up in a hospital instead of a colorful place like this. This is actually quite a beautiful sight.' 'I wonder if Grace is going to be okay. Dad and mom were having difficulties with money while I was away studying in China. I hope they get through it..' I could only sigh when remembering my family's dire situation. 'There really is nothing that I can do to know nor am I able to go back to Earth like this. Now that I think about it, my body seems to be suspended in the air but I cannot feel any of my limbs. I can't even sense how much time I've spent like this, hopefully, something happens after a while.' 'What a strange feeling, although the scenery in front of me is everchanging in different colors since I'm in some kind of space, I don't feel like I'm moving at all but my perceptions tell me that I am slightly doing so.' "!?" Suddenly, the space in front of him started to collapse, creating a massive fracture that extended miles away from his field of view... ___________________________________________________________________ Updates: Any day of the week, not yet decided. Weekends will have no releases. Mc Harem: No bitches? (will be up to you) I do not own any characters that will appear nor the novel Martial Peak besides my ocs. This will be an AU, as our mc is going to break the fundamentals of almost everything. Liang Long will have the most overpowered dao that was ever discovered. The 'find-out-by-reading-the-fanfic' Dao!

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EphemeralKaos
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This is fantastic! Now I am a very critical person so if I think something is bad I’ll say it’s bad if I think something is stupid I’ll say it’s stupid and I don’t really ever give well a review in general but if I do it’s most definitely not a good one, but man let me tell you this is fantastic

Paragen
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The shameless author is here to review his own work because yes. Writing Quality: I feel that I do have a good basis and my vocabulary is capable enough to create a nice and relaxing reading environment for you guys. Story Development: I am nothing but a newbie author, so I don't expect myself to create the biggest plots. But I do have the confidence that I am able to give you guys something decently good. Character Design: google images go brrr. World Background: I tend to give way too many details on the scenery, but I'm taking advice to heart to try to only pinpoint the most important characteristics of the place the characters are. Too much detail makes it tedious and boring, so I'll try my best to not waste so many words on one thing. Stability of Updates: Why is this the last? Well, I am still having trouble with my update schedule. I usually like to release a chapter one day and then write on the other, thus maintaining this type of schedule until the weekend. But I have college to worry about as well, so my main priority is not centered on this fanfic. Anyway, I guess that's it! I hope you enjoy this fanfic as much as I am having a good time writing it. bo-bye!

Evillangal389
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NightOwl_Soren
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Writing Quality: The author's grammar is very good, but there's the occasional mistake here and there, there are some sentences that are more convoluted than they need to be, but overall it's very good. Stability of Updates: Seven chapters have been updated during twenty days, so I'd say the stability of updates is pretty good also. Story Development: So far the story has been pretty engaging and interesting, it isn't the best I've ever read, but since this is the author's first work it has a lot of potential. Character Design: We haven't been given an in-depth review of the MC at the time of this review, besides him hating his name and him losing his emotions during the beginning chapters, and to be honest I'm not sure if I even interpreted that part right either since it does seem like he feels some emotion on the latest chapter, so don't quote me on that. World Background: This is fanfic, unless the author completely butchers the Martial Peak setting this is always going to be a five-star. Thoughts: I got to say this has the potential to be the best Martial Peak fanfic I've read, and to be fair Martial Peak has just been introduced during the last chapter, so I may be jumping the gun here, but the story has been so engaging that I can't help and be optimistic.

NAMI_SWAAAAAN
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Wow. Thats all i can say after reading the prologue. I found little to no grammar mistake and from the looks of it, i’m sure we can expect more with the same quality. Although i haven’t read Martial peak and the novel you’ve mentioned, I’m excited to read more. So thanks and hope you don’t drop this work in the future.

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BrasileiroPutasso
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Just because it's a Martial Peak fic it deserves 5 stars, but I'll control myself. Muito top gostei bastante, não só por ser de Martial peak, mas e bem top, não e a melhor mas também não e a pior, recomendo muito.

Traumer
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In all honesty, this is amazing! I've never seen such quality content in a fanfic before, this is a first! I can already expect this story to be great, looking forward to more!

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