Reviews of Mars and Venus (DROPPED AS PLOT IS GIVEN TO SOMEONE ELSE)
Mars and Venus (DROPPED AS PLOT IS GIVEN TO SOMEONE ELSE)
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Honest review? Personally, not into the idea of quoting someone and using it as a way to start the synopsis. The first thing I'll be reading is the synopsis, so it obviously threw me off when I'm not reading what you write. Prologue chapters are not auxiliary chapters by the way. A prologue is considered a proper chapter and should be counted in your overall word count. Well my short attention span totally lost me but I tried reading through things and - the synopsis is really roundabout? A bunch of characters I don't know. Going from ex lover to older sister to adoptee daughter, what is going on? Although, the whole premise of a hacker bad boy and a not-like-other-girl female lead trope starts off fairly interesting. Small grammar mistakes here and there. Other words sound like they were misused, but nothing big to fret over. A seen before dynamic albeit still uncommon in webnovel, this book is recommendable to anyone looking for something to kill the time.
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After reading it 3 times my brain finally fix up the place that my dyslexia was missing and i finally got to read the chapter how it was meant to be read... it think the story is good i read the prelude and i start the first chapter I'm a bad reader. and the story was interesting for me to go back and read the prelude 3 times and start the first chapter so i think it has potential[img=recommend]
