Review Detail of jailrailsession in Mars and Venus (DROPPED AS PLOT IS GIVEN TO SOMEONE ELSE)
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Honest review? Personally, not into the idea of quoting someone and using it as a way to start the synopsis. The first thing I'll be reading is the synopsis, so it obviously threw me off when I'm not reading what you write. Prologue chapters are not auxiliary chapters by the way. A prologue is considered a proper chapter and should be counted in your overall word count. Well my short attention span totally lost me but I tried reading through things and - the synopsis is really roundabout? A bunch of characters I don't know. Going from ex lover to older sister to adoptee daughter, what is going on? Although, the whole premise of a hacker bad boy and a not-like-other-girl female lead trope starts off fairly interesting. Small grammar mistakes here and there. Other words sound like they were misused, but nothing big to fret over. A seen before dynamic albeit still uncommon in webnovel, this book is recommendable to anyone looking for something to kill the time.
Mars and Venus (DROPPED AS PLOT IS GIVEN TO SOMEONE ELSE)
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thank you for the review, but I expected something much lower for someone who can't speak English without struggling to use a dictionary. I am not really into writing (hence only 2 chapters). Again, I apologise for the bad book and grammar (most of the grammar corrections were helped by a friend (if you noticed the comments). I probably won't be updating this, writing doesn't cut it for me. But I like to read and definitely support your book.
ssfx3yuchens:thank you for the review, but I expected something much lower for someone who can't speak English without struggling to use a dictionary. I am not really into writing (hence only 2 chapters). Again, I apologise for the bad book and grammar (most of the grammar corrections were helped by a friend (if you noticed the comments). I probably won't be updating this, writing doesn't cut it for me. But I like to read and definitely support your book.