Elle_Lynn
Author's here! Thanking for having checked my story! I suggest you reading the first 70-80 chapters since that’s when the main themes of the story will begin shaping up. This book is not only about romance (even if from the first chapters it may appear that way) but there is also fantasy, mistery and suspence involved so I understand it may not be everyone’s cup of tea! Still, hope you give it a try and read first 70 chapters before giving it up! Thank you! 💖💖 Have a good day! :)
Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. I am still dipping my toes into the literally fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesn’t. Books like these are definitely my cup of tea. This book is like the dystopian Lord of the Rings, with its richly developed culture and economics And also the supporting cast of characters is excellent. Please update more author.
Tackle the story first. I don't really read romance books, they aren't my thing. Despite that, you've managed to create a lot of clear drama and intrigue in this first chapter, so if I was into romance novels I'm pretty sure I'd keep reading just to find out what was going to happen next. The writing, for the most part, is actually pretty good. There are a fair few syntax errors, that is to say mistakes in sentence structure and grammar mistakes, but not so many that it's overwhelming and ruins the story. The flow of your writing is fairly well defined, things move into one another decently enough, though in some places it can be a little choppy. That's a problem that everyone, including me, has at times though. I think you should be proud of the work you've done here, and I'm sure your flow and overall sentence structure will improve as you continue to write and iron out your style!
I would definitely rate this book a 5 star because of the classic but common supernatural romance plot but the dialogues are the main fire of this book! This is such an underrated book and deserves much more readers so please give this book a shot and you won't regret it! Highly recommended to all fantasy romance lovers!! BEST OF LUCK!
Engaging, straight to the point, and good in direction, this is a romance novel that manages to keep the reader pay attention to what is going to happen next. The early chapters start off great with the introduction of the world, and the situation of said world via dialogue and events the characters go through. There are no info dumps that talk about the history of the setting and so forth. The author does a fantastic job at showing their characters and setting. Good job author. Keep on writing.
I'll give 5 stars to the novel, because, it is interesting, the story still has few chapters but, I feel that it has a lot of potential. So, I already added to my library, hope to continue reading! Thanks for the new gem my dear author! Keep going, I'm cheering you up from here! xD I'll continue to enjoy the reading, with some tea!