Reviews of Loki’s Successor System

This review will be updated as I progress through the Novel. So far I don’t have any complaints. The system trope is a little cliche here on WN, So I hope SkyStrider does it well. I FELL IN LOVE with the world thIs story’s taking place in. Also, the MC was crippled, yo don’t see that quiTe often, don’t you? I like a lot of things about this novel so far. The dialogue is dynmatic, and quite enjoyable. The mc is interesting. The world is fun. The grammar is perfect. 2 chpqters a day is great. *There is one minor thing I don’t really like about the novel but I won’t rant until the novel has over 150 chapters. Review will update

The characters actually feel real. The mc isn't perfect and makes dumb understandable mistakes. I am excited for what lies ahead. I suck at writing review just trust me its good.

Real Review: Perfect Writing Qualty, Cliff hanger heaven, Perfect everything. except how much leveling up took place. (Author comMented Under my Comment and asked me to read. i don’t have a problem with that.) I LOVE the writing style. The quAlity is perfect, its going to take a lot of out of you to spot a spelling or grammatical erRor. I LOVE THE CHARACTER RELATIONSHIPS AND DYNAMIC. The conversations In this novel feels Alive and fluid in a way. in fact that’s why I countinued reading despite slow Leveling. CLIFFHANGERS. The cliffs are really high and steep. I cOuldn’t stop reading. TROPES AND TONES. The author really outdone him/herself with the themes in this novel such as Betrayal, appearance vs reality, Magical Realism, and More. small fixable probLem (why not 5 starS yet) : This novel has but one problem alone. And that problem is the System Development. There is only a little bit of leveling up as of the first 50 chapters. Not that I have a problem with that at all, I kind of like that. But there are some thIrsty Kids around here Looking for crazy leveling up, and I mean, System is tag here so…yeah. I’m sure that problem would be fixed later. The author was apparently trying to set up other themes so that’s why The mc only gets strong fast after the 50 chapters. you should definitely check this one out. i like it a lot and would continue reading. Review will update as I read more chapters.

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had to give my honest review before my opinions affected it. everything after this is not relevant to the review but your mental health and my opinion. The MC is sick. he murders his own grandma even if unintentionally. however the author made MC murder his grandma for plot development and content. this is horrible content and bad for your health. the way his grandma died is not something that should be written in books per enjoyed. if you enjoyed it, kill yourself or admit yourself into a hospital. you aren't human.

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i am give this 5 stars because. erview Listen Lyrics Other recordings People also search for Main results We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a…

I'm just gonna say it's a very good read. pretty sure just reading the book will grab all your attention The writer does so well with the Plot and character interactions, are not forced it's very realistic Even the characters emotions are something you can often relate to. Also this is a system book so people always expect in 15 chapters that the protagonist or MC will become OP when that's not the case so we just kind of put in a disclaimer so people won't expect the mc to be OP just in 15 chapters and continue reading the book so as to progress more with it and don't get disappointed😉😉

This Novel deserve 1 star overall updating stabilty or writing quality isnt that bad but story devolopment,chracter design and World are worth less than 1 star. You can onlu have a little enjoyment 50+ chapter and its not worth investing your time in this.

i like the story but after more than 30 chapters and he didnt get that strong and still at his normla stats like at the beginning is just to slow for me.

Noooo bejinman and the grandma😭 the Ash kid needs a hug honestly, I can expect it would be so dark, tho the MC just doesn't care, I would rate this book this high just to cry over a dog and a old lady😭😭😭😭

I have been really following this novel for a while, i thought it's time i reviewed, This Novel is epic the Protagonist is off the chain, 😂😂😂👌i love the characters

I got a message to try this novel out from the author I think. It been great so far. Am a big fan of the Marvel Universe and the new Loki Tv show was fantastic, so when I got the message to read this It was right on time. Keep up the good work author. [img=recommend] Cheering for you from the sidelines. You can all go back to reading this fantastic novel. Thanks.

I just pass the Tenth/10 chapter and some how.I’m in the triple digits! It hard to read at first but it only get better.So if you hate the first chapter just keep being until the 21st’ chapter You won’t regret it.

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i'm making this comment from what i found so far from cap 30 i honestly didn't like how mc behaves it can be because of the spell but i absolutely hate how he ignores notifications but like i said this could end up being the effect of spell (that's just my opinion I'm sorry if I've offended someone Google translator)

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Now I don't have a lot of time on my hands to write this review, so I will only go over the characters and their personalities in this review. I am on chapter 20 so far, and let me tell you the author really does know what he is doing when he is writing these characters. The main character (Jin) perfectly represents a boy that is still naïve even after he has gone through many hardships like his parents passing and him getting stabbed in the back by the goblin kid while Jin was helping him. Another great example of this is when Jin's grandmother is trying to get a psychologist for Jin, this is when Jin lashes out at her and says something along the lines of "I changed because I realized how this world is." (That isn't exactly what he said, but it's as close to what he said as I can remember) Yet in the next 5 chapters it shows us that he hasn't really grown from the traumatic experiences he went through, even after he thinks he has overcome the naivety of the world, he still decides to hop into the portal with Flint and the two girls. This one portal scene really does represent how most people are todays, falling into peer pressure and not thinking about the consequences of their actions. Jin knows that he might get stabbed in the back by his newly acquired friends just like he did with the goblin kid, yet right when Flint and the two girls start to attack his pride calling him scared, Jin doesn't care about the consequences anymore and hops into the portal. Honestly I didn't have much time to revise this review, so if nothing made sense in it I apologize. But basically my review sums up to the characters in this story being very well written and very realistic.

Honest revIew here: This is definitely a hidden gem, the quality is great you actually feel like the characters are people with personalities instead of random npcs. sure theres a few flaws and the beginning is pretty slow but trust me it picks up speed. Anyways if your tired of shitty world buildIng and just want to feel connected to the story youve come to the right place (reviewing from chapter 107)