Reviews of Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Sixth
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Author's four stars review, for there's always room for improvement. With those words, feel free to point out all mistakes, typos, etc. All for the improvement! Now, onto the story... Waifus smiles cure my depression... This book is about leveling up with lovely girls! Is it just killing monsters to get exp points? Nah, they level up in many ways. For example, smiling... Ah, beautiful... Not enough? Alright, waifu, cook some meal for my boi. Not enough? Tsk... Alright, cuddle with him... Wait, wait! I said cuddle, not bed wrestling!
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23 chaps in and I must say, good job. This story is solid. The characters a reasonable, the story is fairly interesting, you update regularly, and the writing quality is that of a native English speaker. If your looking for something safe to read that won't disappoint you, then this is the thing. However the flip side is also true. We aren't exactly treading new ground here. No new parts of the fantasy genre are being explored. On top of that, there aren't really any literary risks taken. It's a normal story. That's the only flaw I have found. And that's not really a flaw. All in all, not bad at all.
One needs to understand loss to understand love. Failure to comprehend success. Sixth has not arrived here by chance it was by choice. The long road of novels about Harems and waifus serve as proof. If you have read Deathwill you know the talents, he has. This book will not be any different. Prepare for an adventure with waifus that would melt your heart and bring peace to your weary soul.
Yeah, sorry author, but this is just way too hard to read. --- It's not the grammar or spelling, but something else about how you write. It's like everything is stunted and lacking detail while presuming that the reader perfectly understands everything that's in your head while writing. --- We don't. --- Chinese MTL is easier to comprehend than this. I wish I could give you an exact reason why, because this story is a cool idea, but I can't.
I didn't realize Sixth was the author till a comment, but so far this story is really good. I am astonished how far Sixth has come from the Game Rune System, and Summoned... I married a Yandere. This is another story where the MC feels real and the story isn't carried by the MC always asking "How come? What is that?? Why did they attack me??" so the whole obvious situation can be explained is painstakingly detail. The world and scene setting is delivered in stride with the story.. I just got to the point where it seems the MC's emotions, personality, and actions will take it's first growth spurt. Keep up the good work!!!!
