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Review Detail of KyoelPaska_LSSS in Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!

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Seriously it ended so prematurely? I literally skip many adventures of the Harem and MC, which was one of the proposals he was included in the novel. I was sad because Athena appeared and the work was over, without even showing the adventures with her. And she choking on Leon (MC) outside after the Reunion of the two and their moments in bed crying And hugged. Very sharp cut and final without salt, ending with a dialogue with the Goddess Freya. I sincerely wanted to have read about Harem's pregnancies, her travels, Celes' reaction when she found out she was pregnant since she said she didn't want to have children, seeing Louise and Athena jealous of Celes' Pregnancy and then Athena's Pregnancy, and Louise being the last to become pregnant and giving birth to the Son, then Amaterasu revived and pregnant.But that didn't happen, well sad. Author do you like to write short stories..? I could have written a little more to end up with about 240~300 chapters. But you are the Author and decide the course of history. Summary at the end: Reading was cool, even with Auto Translation. The ending would say cool to know that there were children and Louise getting pregnant (But I wanted to read it!), honestly I was kind of sad that it was like this END. Note: 4 - Not bad, but not so good for the final and cut/timerskip. [img=update]

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Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!

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Errors in this assessment. I'm sorry, I used Google Translate.