MellowGuy
I finished reading the free chapters... So time for the review. The story is not bad, good world background, story development, and characters. I won't delve much on praises as people already did. I will just state my complaints then. First of all, why are there lots of women? He meets lot girls and the story would focus on them. Is the author desperate for ladies? Or personally lack girls? Is this harem? Please tag it. It's fine to include women, maybe two or five, in a story but it would not be fine if the proportion is too disproportionate. Second is, I hate idiots and the MC is one. Though it's fine as I'm still at the building stage of the story. All in all this novel is interesting, entertaining, and one you would not drop easily unless problem persist.
The story has been fairly interesting until I reach chapter 122. With all that magic in the world over hundreds of years and homophobia is still a thing, it's just disappointed. If you can't handle diversity then just don't bring it into the story. Possessing a positive and serious mind, I don't agree with how you portrait your "peculiar" characters. So my journey stops here. Thanks for the interesting chapters so far.
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I discovered this novel last week thanks to the recommendations and I have unlocked all the chapters available. The characters are excellent, the story is original and the background is really good. I recommend this original novel to all the fans of stories with runesmithing, cultivation, martial arts and great protagonist gaining powers through his daily efforts.
Let me start this review by saying that for the last goodness how long I've been sending this story every stone that I'm able to, that and I'm a privileged reader, and I've even sent the story a gift too. If that doesn't let you know how much I enjoy this story then I don't know what else will. I admit there are a few issues with the story and wish that they get touched upon, but hey that's just a bit of niggles to my overall enjoyment of the story.
"Story includes more than one POV help……" "Weak-to-Strong doesn't happen within the 1st chapter, HELP……" "MC can't become saitama and one tapped every conflict(?!??!?) 1 Star... MC = beta" …… Some people are just straight up brain dead borderline illiterate… that's why the moment they see a story that doesn't fall into any of the 3 mentioned above, their brain instantly snapped.
Read UpTo ch54 It all changed when I reached ch 52, The story caught my interest in the beginning, Nearly destroyed it in the middle, but when it reached 52, specifically 54, it got me hooked. Everything became much more logical and reasonable. And I loved the character growth 📈. Some specific guy kept commenting patience... patience... and that helped me continue :P
Arthur I will give you my highest review rating, mainly because your light novel is both interesting and highly addictive. Towards the end of every chapter always feel like I need to know what's going to happen next which is highly enjoyable. The only downside I could think of is that it only has two hundred and something chapters when I'm reviewing this, so I wish I could have discovered this a year later, so that I could benge read more of this.
I read this work. It is good, but at times I wanted to quit. I would be glad if the author or someone who knows how to answer me. 1. His level-up heritage gives a direct way to increase stats, but does not use this path. He often says that he needs to become stronger, but after receiving a few stat points, he stops. 2.his fate his actions in the past affect his future, (court or his meetings), he tries to substitute his actions for the future, not realizing that everything he does not lead to what happened 3. he adds problems to himself (not because of the hero), but because the author so wished. I can say that this is not fate, but the author interferes with the hero 4 slow action. he pumped and now he himself says that he is ready to increase the rank, and then the story goes into a completely different direction