please read this

while I published 79 chapters to this day, comments are non-existent, and few bookmarked this story, I know I'm a rookie, and my first plan to learn what I'm doing wrong from the comments has failed

as such in the last two weeks I have read many successful novels, I wanted to understand what I'm doing wrong, and what I could do better

but before I start let me assure you that the idea behind the story won't change, just the execution, if someone doesn't want to re-read from the start, they won't lose out much, but I would still appreciate feedback if it's not asking too much,

I added a (work in progress) to every chapter, and I will remove them when I'm satisfied with the chapter starting from the bottom and going up

I personally want to thank the few that bookmarked and seem to follow the story, let me assure you that I will come back

the definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over again expecting a different result as such I have to change something to make at least one person say that my story is good

as such what I will change is:

first, I will try to be more descriptive of the character's physical endowments, as I noticed that in the highly valued novel, they go as far as describing what kind of clothes the characters are wearing every day

second in case no one noticed the character growth I planned for daniel was to go from a baby to a spoiled brat then he will eventually do something that even the old monsters can't let slide and would grow into a functioning member of the Sun Federation society, as such I will try to make it clearer by doing some editing

third, regarding the interactions with Tickles, I will try to make it more present as a character, as it's always there but rarely speaks his mind

fourth while I think I made Daniel somewhat op, it's also true that his physical body is just slightly stronger than that of a mortal, right now he is enjoying the protection of the family, but as it could be seen in the last few chapters the federation isn't as safe as it looks, and the Specters have many strong enemies, so I don't really know how, but I will try to up the thrill factor

as far as I understood these are the mistakes I'm making, I hope that if someone reads this they can give me feedback and tell me if I'm right or wrong or what else I'm missing as I said before this is my first time publishing a novel and any feedback it's welcome thank you in advance