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Jack Hanma: True might [reworked]

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What is Jack Hanma: True might [reworked]

Read Jack Hanma: True might [reworked] fanfiction written by the author SaishoMysteriarch on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering action, adventure, sliceoflife. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Jack Hanma is one of if not the most disrespected character of the baki series despite him being one of the strongest in it. but what if that changed what if him being an unpure hanma had a different meaning then what you would expect. Note: this my first time writing and English isn't my native language so the first two chapters are a bit rough but it gets better from chapter 3 and onwards. The cover image isn't mine. note: under the recent changes I decided That I well be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com and Fanfiction.net under the same name for both the story and the account.

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THE OUTWORDLY

The milky way universe was at it's calm, everything both human and animals lived in harmony. Until the day humans began to kill animals for their selfish gains and reason. Animals were being experimented on, they were trying to know about the origin and how they came to be. Some wild animals tried to fight back but they couldn't hold a candle against the advancement of their foe. Humans greed became insatiable, which resulted in the destruction of their ozone layer, making the climate go into disarray. Suddenly, at night where everything seems to be cool, the moon which was half, instantly became full. It brimmed with a deep blood red colour, the strange phenomenon intrigued humans who tried to disseminate and research on the cause of the red moon. The morning seize to exist, night began it's reign over the universe. Unbeknownst to humans, the blood red moon was releasing a continuous and rapid wave of bloodlust that filled the atmosphere, thereby resulting in the evolution and bloodlust of the animals. Both wild and domestic couldn't avoid the bloodlust which resulted to the final separation of man and beast and the war between human and animals. As if that wasn't enough, Aliens with more advancement to that of humans came from unknown universe and begin to invade the milky way, the humans and beasts were too focused on taking out each other, not being aware of the impending doom awaiting them. The Alien began the conquest of the milky way, killing everything that comes in their way while enslaving those that surrendered. The humans and animals were forced to ally together to fend off the Aliens but everything became a stalemate with both sides being evenly strong. Everything stayed with both sides being on edge and borders being created. Though fighting do happen for the expansion of lands. Hundreds of years later a large ball of light shot down from the sky like a meteorite, it fell into the largest ocean which wasn't dominated by either forces due to it's dangerousness of the ocean and its large size. This brought about the question.......how will the inhabitants of the milky way fend of their unending foe? What could be in that ball of light that fell into the ocean? How is it's discovery help the milky way inhabitants or how will it be their end?

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Sirviente de sangre I : Playful Destiny

1890. Panahon ng pananakop ng mga Espanyol sa Pilipinas. Ang kanilang lugar ay nahahati sa tatlong linya, ang linya na para sa mga Espanyol, linya para sa mga Indio at ang linya na para sa mga immortal na kung tawagin nila ay mga bampira. Sinasamba ng halos karamihan ang mga bampira mas mataas ang kanilang posisyon noong panahon ng espanyol. Kristala Fulgencio o mas kilalang Tala ay pumasok sa isang Unibersidad na ekslusibo lamang para sa mga babae para sa isang misyon. Yun ay ang makapasok sa palasyo ng mga bampira at makilala ang batang pinuno nito na si Nicolas. Nag-umpisa ang kwento nong inutusan ng isang maestro si Kristala na iabot ang mga papel sa itaas na palapag ng Unibersidad. Doon niya unang nakilala si Nicolas ang sinasabing pinakabatang pinuno ng mga bampira. Namatay ang ama nito sa kamay ng mga indio at siya agad ang pinalit. Dahil kung walang pinuno ang mga bampira ang kanilang lahi ay manghihina. Nag-umpisa sa salitang “Binabati kita, ginalit mo ako” at si Kristala ay nagging isang sirviente de sangre. Isang Blood servant. Tagapagbigay ng dugo sa mga bampira dahil hindi sila mabubuhay ng matagal kung tanging dugo lamang ng mga hayop ang kanilang iinumin. Sa pagpasok ni Kristala sa palacio de vampiro ay marami siyang natuklasan tungkol sa mga bampira. Kumakain pala ito na parang isang tao. May mga bata at pamilya. Nasusugatan din at nanghihina at higit sa lahat marunong din pala silang umibig. Ayon sa mga babaylan at mangbabasa ng kapalaran si Tala ang rason ng panghihina ni Nicolas. Ayon din sa isang matanda, iibig si Kristala sa isang bampira ngunit hindi sa panahong ito uusbong ang kanilang pag-iibigan.

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AbsoluteLoliLover
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The First Law of Fan Fiction: Every change which strengthens the protagonist requires a corresponding worsening of his challenges. Or, to put it plainly, you cannot make Harry Potter a Jedi without giving Lord Voldemort the Death Star. Read any book on writing and it will tell you that stories are all about conflict. A hero who is so strong that his conflicts are no longer problems is no longer in a story worth reading. The most fatal temptation of fan fiction is to think of how much easier your character's life would be if he was super-powered. We are naturally inclined to think of ways to solve our characters' problems for them. But first we much think of ways to make their lives more difficult. - Worldmaker.

ShodaiKokyu
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Hey it's me again, you finally edited the earlier chapter and keep improving in the latest chapter. So i will delete my old review and give 5 stars now

The_Rune_Raven
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Kengan Asura and Baki are rarely used stories so this is already a plus on top of that Jack is also a rare character as he inherited parts of the hanma bloodline baki didn't and vice versa so it's very neat especially if mc can awaken Jacks sight ability early

UchihaGOD
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I hope you continue to write. more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

DeluxeOG
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The novel is great so far. pacing is good. interesting mc. well done author .................................................................

Devilboi1
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Honestly wasn’t expecting much with this book from the beginning but it’s just getting better and better, props to the author and hope u continue this book.

Johnny_G
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Tam132
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It's good. I like it.

KingofCrimson
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I really like the idea it's a cool and unique story author improves after the 2 chapter there are still some mistakes but I could deal with them perfectly fine

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Eclipse_Gate12
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Writing quality 5 star Story development 4 star Character design 3 star Updating stability 4 star World background 3 stars. Overall 3.8 1) Let's talk about the writing quality, I haven't seen any major mistakes till now. The writing style is good, I don't need the Chinese reference anymore, They are hard to understand. Ohh and You Didn't write like that so it is a 3-star from me already. No mistakes with "HE" OR "SHE" so an extra Star and the last one because I liked it. (4-stars) 2) The Story development is good, nothing to say more as the original Baki series has a good plot but overpowered characters without magic. I am thinking what will happen if you introduce Magic to them?. The pacing is good, some slice of life will be good, to see how he manages his girlfriend as he is so tall already. (4 stars) Because of some small things, if you go like this, it will be finished before 140 chapters. 3) The character design is good but you have never gone into the details of how he was born or how he came to be. I know that jack's Mom's story is tragic but it will also give depth to his character. You are not using the system to its full potential. Don't get me wrong but you should increase the power level a little in this story, I will talk more about it in the World background. So even if you don't want to make him too powerful, you can just modify his body in a way like the skin "Hardening" it won't need too much XP or soul. I will give 4-star to it I am sad that the system is not used Properly. 4) The updating stability is cool, you post daily if you don't have some work or something. (4-Stars). 5)World background! Why are you only in Japan? It's a whole world man, and Baki's world is super interesting you should make Jack explore a little about it. This world has so much potential, Introduce some special abilities or mutation to say. Increase the strong characters, increase the mystery, and increase the chaos. That way the MC will feel threatened and he will have to use his potential to its full extent. Introduce a mass meteor strike with small but a lot of meteors falling all over earth giving the humans and animals some special abilities/mutations and it is totally possible. Until now a human that came from the Jurassic era and a clone of Myamoto mysashi with is real soul in it has been shown, a hag who practices dark arts. I don't know if there is more but I have not finished it yet. I have given it 3stars and honestly I want to give it 2-stars so that you can do something about it. Their is so much that can be done. I wrote too much for the first time. It's 2645 words long..

Daoistnff2Xl
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It hurts me that it is there restarting but I wish you the best😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👍😁👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👋👋💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

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Kaito_Uzumaki
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If you'all read his previous version then. It's easy. Just triple the great things about jlit and you get this

LucasRDL
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I need more chapter ray now please ,

BoneDaddySuccubi
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The novel was well-written and I enjoyed reading it more than most novels. I don't think it needs to be edited nor did I notice any glaring plotholes. The only thing I didn't like about this novel was the romance as I dislike the genre. I have read novels for a few years yet only 3 or 4 novels have made me invested in the relationship and improved the quality of the work. Although I didn't enjoy the romance in this novel, you did a decent job of implementing it and making it bearable despite my strict standards. Overall, I hope that despite whatever choices you make that suit you the best, you will continue to add to this novel in addition to creating more remarkable novels. By some random Lazy guy

Samot_Sempai
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Best baki fanfic thet I had ever read,please don't drop this fic

Aswin_SS
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I like the story so much I always wanted to read an baki fanfic and jack hanma was my favorite one because of his height but he was weak as he'll in the orginal.I am waiting for more chapters😄

Murdda223
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More ch plz or make a another novel ‼️

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