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Reviews of Into marvel as a celestial

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Into marvel as a celestial

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Ikar0z
Ikar0zLv13Ikar0z

story could be interesting but the grammar and overall english will probably fry your brain if you try to read it............................

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natman
natmanLv15natman

first of all I love the idea, it has so much potential...... Buuuuuuut! the execution is simply horrible, the grammar, the pacing even the spacing. again great idea, proofread it.

MichaelSingh
MichaelSinghLv3MichaelSingh

Awesome story. It is one of the best op series that i have seen till now . Keep it up. Don't drop . It has alot of potential man. πŸ’―πŸ₯³πŸ”°πŸ˜πŸ˜ŠπŸ€‘πŸ‘πŸ‘»πŸ˜€βœŒπŸ™‚πŸ˜‡πŸ™πŸ˜†πŸ‘πŸ’€πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ’•β€πŸ’―πŸ₯³πŸ”°

BorisTakerman
BorisTakermanLv1BorisTakerman

Hard to read, hard to understand, requires you to edit the novel yourself just to read it, also its fan-fic about the marvel universe, I dont know why its in the novel section.

YogSothoth805
YogSothoth805Lv13YogSothoth805

The grammar is horrible and the sentences are horibbly structured ................................................................................

Paradgrim
ParadgrimLv3Paradgrim

I just can't man, I would read more but I noped out from reading the first chapter. The grammar is beyond terrible. This would be a great read if chapters were edited and grammar was fixed.

Solomon_Bourne
Solomon_BourneLv15Solomon_Bourne

Looks like it was written by a child tbh ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Jmtxam
JmtxamLv1Jmtxam

If you could stop rewriting the story with only the mc being a celestial and the rest being completely different from the previews versions and simply make them into different stories that would be great. Also, I don't understand how, after so many different versions of the story, your english is still so horrible? One would think that you would improve your english after rewriting the story so many times...

File_01_Adam
File_01_AdamLv4File_01_Adam

Amazing. What you did my friend is beyond plus ultra. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

JayGelani
JayGelaniLv3JayGelani

Very Nice book , I'm very excited to read the story further. Please update chapters soon. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Corrupted_Puppet
Corrupted_PuppetLv1Corrupted_Puppet

I and my poor friend, godzilla had a heart attack and died from reading this BAD WRITING vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv

TyrantTron335
TyrantTron335Lv5TyrantTron335

I wonder will he become destroyer. So he can balance the creation In the universe. I love op Mc forever.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Zicarius
ZicariusLv2Zicarius

Dude This So Cool And Op We need more chapters I wanna know what happens next.... .. . .............. ...... ....... ............ .......... .....

ggg_0865
ggg_0865Lv4ggg_0865

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Dretno
DretnoLv3Dretno

You drop it and you are dead....!.......,....,.................................................!...............................................

Corrupted_Puppet
Corrupted_PuppetLv1Corrupted_Puppet

get better at writing before ya write a book hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhgggghhghggggghyyhtugtuhguhhuhygggggg . 5se6grisyrbid64huuygyegjtucet

James8026
James8026Lv13James8026

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Daoist650551
Daoist650551Lv3Daoist650551

Reveal spoiler

Dao_of_infinity
Dao_of_infinityLv14Dao_of_infinity

I feel like the author either needs to have an editor or needs to learn how to speak and type english better. Even though the synopsis seems interesting I would not recommend this book because of the poor writing quality.

Mr_Birb
Mr_BirbLv4Mr_Birb

I'm enjoying this more than I thought I would. Also, maybe its cuz I'm used to mtl but the writing doesn't actually bother me that much. All in all, neato.