Tengu_of_Old
So far the book is alright. You could look at it as a nice novel with an ok storyline so far with a kinda dumb and fun author leaving behind silly notes for example Chapter 9 I'd actually named bountiful booty even though it ain't that "booty". The storyline so far is nice but I wouldn't put it as great but since it's still in the early chapters I feel it might develop better. The world design is nice and quite logical, I mean looking at our world we're pretty much sure it's the nukes that's gonna mess us up. If I have an issue, it would be the release rate like the last gentleman stated and even though the author did mention he/she is a newcomer I would really hope it improves better. So far for a beginner at writing, this book is amazing.
I have to say that this is quite a nice book. The only issue I actually have is that the release rate is quite slow for a new book. If it were actually any faster, I might give it a 5 star rating. The world plot and design is quite nice with the story's development being impressive and nice. I also like the fact the author seemed to have reinvented the entire Earth in this book though it might seem lacking compared to some others.
honestly he story is neither good neither bad, I should say average. The story go like I like to say Chinese style, dragging and putting many useless thing to make more words/chapters. we're at 400chapters and the mc is lvl 15 and the average of the server is around 10/12. a boss is around 20 to 40 chapters with always full people coming like ants. Even the simple act of putting items to auction took 4 to10 chapters cause a full band of "stupid Youngs masters" come to drag more where a chapter would have be enough (well honestly we could do without since it was just non sense and useless). the story could be way better without all this dragging every fight with void. I really hope that you can reduce a lot the CN style to have a good pace of your story
The author is unable to keep a steady flow. He is unable to stay on track with story you will be bombarded with fillers and lots of chapters just repeat what was said the chapter before. Even after over 200+ chapters the main chapter still can't beat a level 10 boss. The author has no clue as to what he wants to do with the story which is sad because it could have been a decent novel.
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