Review Detail of kuuhh in Infinite Realm
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honestly he story is neither good neither bad, I should say average. The story go like I like to say Chinese style, dragging and putting many useless thing to make more words/chapters. we're at 400chapters and the mc is lvl 15 and the average of the server is around 10/12. a boss is around 20 to 40 chapters with always full people coming like ants. Even the simple act of putting items to auction took 4 to10 chapters cause a full band of "stupid Youngs masters" come to drag more where a chapter would have be enough (well honestly we could do without since it was just non sense and useless). the story could be way better without all this dragging every fight with void. I really hope that you can reduce a lot the CN style to have a good pace of your story
Infinite Realm
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Thank you for your honest review and I really apologize for that đ I'm just starting out and most of the books I've read are CN so my writing style is heavily influenced by it. as for the chapter dragging, I didn't even intend for that to happen but it did. This book was written on a whim so...you get the picture, the plot isn't all planned out. However, the latest volume which starts from 411 would see a lot of improvement on this . once again, thank you for your honest review, it really helps me