Reviews of In The Multiverse With Two Golden Fingers! (Don't Read)
In The Multiverse With Two Golden Fingers! (Don't Read)
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Good story progress so far. neeed moooreee~ [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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it's pretty entertaining but the writing quality ain't so good sometimes it feels like I'm reading an MTL of an already bad book. Whenever there is a POV change, paragraphs are repeated such as in Chapter 12 or something where the same 4 paragraphs are repeated 3 times. Also, there is so much cringe I just want to jump off a building and end it all
writing is fabulous, easy to read without any errors or complex words.(5/5) story is kinda i don't know hasn't progressed at all, don't know we're it is going. It would be better if there is a bit more focus on story progress, don't get me wrong it is really good and one of my favourite fanfic. Its just a matter of 'what if'.(3.5/5) characters are good it does feel they r a bit one-dimensional but they R good.(4/5) updates r good of minum 7ch/week goin upto 15ch/week.(5/5) world building we don't need to for popular fictions i.e. like ATG, OP FAIRY TAIL etc.(4.5/5) . in case author forgets to give the world synopsis of less or unpopular fictions. ,