Review Detail of Just_readin in In The Multiverse With Two Golden Fingers! (Don't Read)

it's pretty entertaining but the writing quality ain't so good sometimes it feels like I'm reading an MTL of an already bad book. Whenever there is a POV change, paragraphs are repeated such as in Chapter 12 or something where the same 4 paragraphs are repeated 3 times. Also, there is so much cringe I just want to jump off a building and end it all